They are shedding tears, but I won’t write to wipe them,
They lost their loved ones, but I won’t write to sympathise them.
They are threatened, but I won’t write to warm them,
They are horrified, but I won’t write to calm them.
Lives were washed away, under the sheets of bullets,
They pulled the trigger and terrorized them to the fullest.
Horrific wounds are buried under thick smoke of bomb,
while we just raise our voices on facebook dot com.
Furiously, the families were torn apart,
And a child asked them, “Don’t you have a Heart?”.
The world also cried, when flag of inhumanity was waved,
When the harmony of world and the peace were enslaved.
Death parcels fell from sky like present,
They killed innocents, “was this your intent?”.
To shoot his Dad, he was the one appointed,
While on other side, his mother was gunpointed.
This is not a movie which you can rewind,
An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind.
“we ruined their lives,” they say with boast,
But Education is the power they fear the most.
They are shedding tears, but I won’t write to wipe them,
Let the tears be your strength and I will write to fight them.
They lost their loved ones, but I won’t write to sympathise them,
Let the hatred be always in your eyes and I will write to incise them.
Because, now is the time to say “ENOUGH!”
Woah, this poem made my heart ache. It’s indeed deep, powerful and touching.
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Thank you so much!!
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A heart touching poem. Thank you for presenting it to us. #Respect
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Thank YOU so much for reading it!!! πππ
Glad you liked it…
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Thank you so much!! ππ
I am glad you liked it.
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let those tears be strength… powerful sentence. touching poem..
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Thank you so much for reading… πππ
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No offence to the other works, but according to me you should continue with this genre. This is simply amazing!
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Thank you so much for your suggestion, I will surely consider it…
I would love to hear from you about my other poem too…
And yes, words are the greatest weapon against terrorism! Saw your post on refugee camps, could feel the situation and their helplessness…
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Visit http://beyondwords0120.wordpress.com for amateur poetry .we welcome your comments on our work
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Such a breathtakingly wonderful poem. xx
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Thank you so much!!! πππ
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This poem was so incredibly moving. I have also been deeply emotionally impacted by the terrorism that seems to be enslaving our world. Enough is enough…
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True, God just made differences and we made divisions. But terrorism is a whole different thing, it has nothing to do with humanity. But, after so much of sacrifice, pain and loss of lives, we must stand up against this inhuman evil. Someone need to stand and say ‘enough’! Let’s hope for a better and peaceful world… π
Thank you so much, I am glad you liked it… π
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ah! Terrorism is actually a pain in veins…Good job
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Yes, true.
Thank you so much…
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This is touching, d gruesome act of the wicked ones get on d nerves…
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I am glad my poem provoked you.
thank you so much!
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https://ladypoemblog.wordpress.com/ pls visit often
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I surely will.
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I hope to one day write poems that can change peoples views on things. You are already achieving that, don’t take that gift for granted.
poetrytosavethewordblog.wordpress.com
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This is such a beautiful compliment for me…
It really means a lot to me.
You surely will write poems that can change the world. Poetry is meant to do that!
Oh god, I am still smiling reading it, Thank you so much!!! Check out other poems as well…
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Continue your work! Terrorism is a great place to to tap into what you are feeling about a very controversial issue!
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Thank you so much for reading it and the appreciation… ππ
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Wow i hope you keep writing Harsh! this made my heart ache and is so well put together! Perfectly put truly! π π π
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Thank you so much Maureen for your beautiful comment…
I am really glad to be your friend here…
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Yay blogging!! ahhaha! you are welcome its my pleasure! π
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Enough is enough!
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This one is just PERFECT! Sorry I reblogged that without your permission but I loved it.
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There’s no need to say sorry, actually I am really happy…
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Thank you so much for the reblog…
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Such powerful poem… Here’s an experience too http://wp.me/p4vcHC-gj
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Thank you so much!!
Your post was great, too… Just read it…
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heart touching, so nice……really good….
check out my poetry….
https://breadomlette.wordpress.com/2016/10/18/heart-to-heart-poetry/
if my blog is really good so give your valuable comments, likes and follw it…..
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I have been browsing on-line greater than 3 hours nowadays, yet I by no means discovered any fascinating article like yours.
It is lovely value enough for me. In my opinion, if all webmasters and bloggers made excellent content as you did,
the web will be a lot more helpful than ever before.
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Thank you so much Bill for your kind words.
I am really glad you liked my poem…
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Have a wonderful day!
You may have my email subscription, if you like my post and want to read future post.
Bye! π
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Is there any specific terrorist activity that inspired you to write this?
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I won’t say any *specific* activity because terrorism is terrorism, may it happen in India or any other country. I just used the image of Mumbai Taj Hotel attack pic because that’s what I got at that moment.
Actually, the story of this poem is quite interesting, it was the start of my blogging journey! want to know?
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Wow! Actually it’s very deep and heart felt. I am even moved internally when I see or hear any such activities but never managed to write such epic thing π
So first thought after reading this poem was something would have affected you strongly that you penned down it so beautifully.
And yes I’ll like to know more. Tell me.
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So get ready to hear my struggle story! *dim lights please*
It all started when my tecaher asked me to write soemthing for school magazine and the topics were – School participation in Swacchta Abhiyaan, poem on cleanliness drive and everything related to particpation and particpation! so, I said – “Mam, can’t I write about something else, like “terrorism”? and she said – “yeah, you can try”
and then what happened, I wrote this down and I was actually impressed with this piece because I never really wrote a poem like this.
so I went to school and tada *apprecaitions appreciation* no, nothing happneed likethat. my peom was loved by my friends and also ,loved by my teachersBut I didn’t sent it for magazine…
and then I searched on net how to publish your poem, then came blog! Then I chose wordpress and it was my first post…. you will notice that I have directly put poem and nothing else in this post like heloo and bye bye because I didn’t knwo what to do then and it was so new for me…
and then my journey of wordpress started, a beautiful joruney where i met so wonderful bloggers that I can’t explain (one of them being you, right now) and from then, I am loving it.
so, after some time, I sent it for school amagazine, happy news it got selected but neevr published… i know what’s happening it got delayed opr something but I am happy that I found wordpress instead and got so much love from here…
similar poem of mine is also there, check out poem category…
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oh it was too long, sorry for the ehadache!
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Haha! I’m a fast reader so no need of sorry π
Well this was great. How a single school activity made you land directly owning a great blog π
But you write really great π
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Thank you so much! Even I am grateful for that to my school teacher.
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Now, I really love ebing here. I don’t use much social media (rarely, whatsapp and that also not my personal) so, I just spend my time here, being productive… π
Owning a blog is a great feeling, you know!
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Yes right π I joined this since a month and m loving being here. It’s a great place really. Hope we spend a lot time here being productive and learning and sharing π
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They are shedding tears, but I wonβt write to wipe them,
Let the tears be your strength and I will write to fight them.
They lost their loved ones, but I wonβt write to sympathise them,
Let the hatred be always in your eyes and I will write to incise them.
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Its so beautifully crafted! It’s brimming with emotions
WONDERFULL !! π
You are greatly talented π Keep up the good work!!
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Thank you so much Akash Bhai…
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Happy Blogging…
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Awesome …I think that this one of your best work .!!!!! …good luck .π
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Thank you so much!!!
You threw a like bomb at me… and unknowingly I messaged you, please ignore that…
Thanks again… πππ
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Don’t even know what you are talking about
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Is*
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Difficult and unfortunate aspect of life to write about. Great job
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Thank you so much!!!
How did you come here, to visit my blog?
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I often look around for other writers who I enjoy reading. I’ve noticed you also have a few connected stories going on. I do that too sometimes (What Happened When Frank Died and The Last Prophet). I am looking forward to reading those as well. Maybe learn something from how you do it. (I’m very new to blogging stories so I’m always curious to see how others do things)
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I will surely check them out!!! If you are interested, check out my series, blue Watery Eyes!! I hope you’ll like it…
Just one last question: where are you from?
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Yeah that is the one I have bookmarked for later. I am from Massachusetts but I haven’t lived there for years. I live in St. Petersburg, Russia.
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That’s awesome!!! ππ
Nice meeting you…π
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You too
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I could not refrain from commenting. Exceptionally well written!
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Thank you so much!!!! I am so gald you liked it! ππ
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Wow Harsh, I have no words to say, dear. What a poet you are and so agree with you that I need to put rhyming words in my poems but am not very rhyming types but when reading few bloggers beautiful poems am too getting little inspired. But you have written simply marvelously and what an honor u have given to the soldiers and it absolutely touched me, am still wondering what a beautiful poem. So now you have to tell me which you did not do yesterday pick up a stanza from my poem and give me a rhyme.
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Ah nothing like that, it was like my first attempt at officially writing a poem, haha I am really glad you liked it!!!
So you want me to modify one of your phone’s stanza? I mean, I need to write in my own words to make it rhyme, will that be good? ππ
Hope you’re having a great day!
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Yes harsh and you pick up any stanza you like and send me in my post, let me see then even I can do that when I am going to write another poem next week and the title will be “Keep Yourself Free”, so start and let me know. Are you on facebook dear.
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No Di, I am not on fb…
I just came from school, I will send it as soon as possible… please don’t mind the delay, I will surely try to send it… π
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Oh for sure and good one way not on facebook cause one must concentrate on studies, all these will come in due time, good boy I must say, Harsh. You know it feel like I am conversing with you like my son dear, sometimes there is a bond between souls who do not see or talk to each other. For sure do your homework and when you have free time let me know. Take care.
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That’s so sweet if you. You know even I feel like I have a family here, even if I have never met them but I know that they all have beautiful hearts including you… ππ
And I feel so blessed to get so much of care from you all…
Will surely send you asap…
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For sure dear, now no disturbing concentrate on your studies and when free for sure give me a beautiful stanza as you always do. Yes all bloggers have become like a close knit family and feel so connected.
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A Village life has its own charm,
At the break of dawn, all shine and rise
all Farmers tending to their small farm,
and help each other for they are wise.
idk if it’s good but I think my brain have gone for a holiday, hahaha
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Hahahaha Harsh very nicely written that one line but u also became relaxed in this beautiful scenery and put your mind for a toss.πππππ
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yeah, That’s totally true… haha
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U know dear I am not very good at rhyming but will yet try.
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atleast try, thats the best part… and yes, one of the best poems are also written in such a manner that they don’t rhyme at all, so keep writing poems, I am sure you’re gonna be wonderful at it… π
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Thanks dear Harsh but of course will definitely try but u r too good dear, I saw your new post right now will go and have a look, still clearing few old posts.
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π Don’t mention…
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Thanks dear.
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Great poem!! Good job!π
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Thank you so much, the escapist (sounds beautiful) Have a great day!
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Pleasure!! π
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May I simply say what a comfort to find somebody who really understands what they’re talking about on the
internet. You actually realize how to bring an issue to light and make it important.
More and more people really need to look at this and understand this side of your story.
I was surprised you aren’t more popular since you definitely have
the gift.
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I know this is a spam, but it’s so good. So I’m gonna approve you!!
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This is Fab Writing’s first post and it is absolutely fabulous. I couldn’t resist reblogging this poem and I hope you guys appreciate this post as much as I do π
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THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
It means a lot to me that you reblogged my first post! I don’t know how to express my gratitude in words. But just know, I wish something great happens to you today! Wish you a good day! π
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Thank you so much! I wish you beautiful writing as always.
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Thanks a lot! π
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Oh my holy God.. let me take a moment to embrace the beauty of this poem!
I just found this from a reblog and until then I didn’t know that you had written something soo mind-blowinly powerful..
“This is not a movie which you can rewind,
An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind.”
Daaamn Harsh! You’re a legend bro! ππ
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‘Legend!’ Thats a huge word!!!!
Gotta work hard to achieve it!!!
It gave me immense pleasure to read this comment. You don’t know how much grateful I am to have these moments of pleasure by the comments written by you!
Thank you so much Miss Dark Ji!!! ππ
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Maybe a huge word but suits you well bro! π as much as it excited me to type these comments I’m also honored that I’ve found someone as talented as u on this platform!
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And I am so blessed to have found such a beautiful soul like you, here on this platform.
You’re on my short list of the bloggers I would love to meet in real life one day!! πππ
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You’re on the top of my list too! :*
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wow….such a strong poem….it is similar to my, “Blood Splash” but written from a different angle…you can check it here https://kingstefanwritingzone.wordpress.com/2017/02/10/blood-splash/
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Wow!! Brilliant! ππ
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Thank you so much for taking time to read it!!
I am so glad you liked it! ππ
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It’s a pleasure, dude!
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I had goosebumps reading it…. I still remember that horrific night when it happened but this incident also makes me proud of our army!!!! A big salute to our courageous and fearless soldiers…without whom we won’t be living at our homes comfortably…
And I am gonna reblog it..π
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Yes. Our army deserves much more respect than we offer them!
A big salute to them!
You’re gonna reblog it!? Seriously? You know Di this day is one of the best days to have two whole posts by you only for me!!!! It feels so gooooood!!!!
I can’t even thank you for that! Dammit!
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Yes! They do… you know, I have even met one in the train…he was going where he had a posting and he didn’t had food with him…. So my family and him shared the food and had our lunch together and he was so fun to talk to…they do deserve much more respect and a hike in their financial income too…ππππ
I’ve already reblogged it….ππ
Yes, you can’t! You’re forbidden to say that to me….
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That’s so sweet and kind of you and your family!
That isn’t fair though!
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Nah…. I think it is nothing…. for what they do for us…. But yes! That journey is memorable for me…
That’s absolutely fair! You know I don’t like it when someone thank me especially you…. I just don’t know why I am so attached to you even a little thing related to you affects me so much… I don’t know if it’s a good thing or not..
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It’s always a good thing! ππππ haha even I felt so bad at those times when things were going wrong. Maybe because we shared a great bond of brotherandsister! Haha
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Don’t we now?
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And we share it even now. ππ
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ππ How’s the admission process going?
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My ex school said no about pcmb, so I think I’m gonna take admission in another after results…
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All the best then… I wish you get your choice of stream and a best friend in your school!! π
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Not better than Jason though, and a girl not prettier than Aurora! Lol ππππ
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πππ I second that!!! Jason is a best friend for you πfor me…he is my heartbeat and Aurora is yours…I guess ππ
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ππ I guess ham dono ki hi tamanna adhuri rh jayegi… Because they are fictional! πππππ
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Hahahaha…..😂😂kuch tamannayein adhuri rehne ke liye hi ujagar hoti hai chote sahab…. Kuch kuch hota hai little brother.. Tum nhi samjhoge…. 😭
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Haaye… Kitne deep shabd h ye!!! ππππππ
Some desires are born just to be abandoned at the end, gotta use it in my book!
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Hahaha… Aajkal na mai thode shayar logo se baat karti hu…usi ka asar hai…😄😂
Are waah! I’m honoured…. But kaunsi book? Naam toh bataiye chote sahab..:)😄
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Di. Don’t tell me you never knew that Blue watery eyes is the book I’m working upon. πππππ
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I know…. But authors do have a big bundle of thoughts with a proportionate mixture of curiosity and imagination… So, you know… You could be working on a new book too..ππ
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Hahahahahah, ππππππ I’m not that great author Di!! ππππ
I can hardly handle this story, the other one will murder me!!
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You’re underestimating yourself little brother! Trust me…. You are a great author… And I am proud of you!! ππ
Hahaha… If you think it’ll murder you…you’re no less than Sherlock Holmes… πππ
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That means a lot to me Di!!
And why? Sherlock Holmes died of a book arrest? Sorry but I haven’t read even a single story of him. ππ
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Me too!! I didn’t know he died….just know he was an awesome detective… Sorry! π
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Hahaha. πππ No problem! ππ
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Oh god! This is embarrassing.. 😭
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Don’t feel that way! πππ Its getting late, will say goodnight for now. Have horror Dreams! ππ
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This is such a great poem that I am running short of words to praise it! I truly believe that a persons age has nothing to do with the maturity or the talent. But you have got some serious talent kid ! Age brings only experience so I am telling this, that your talent is way beyond your experience. Never let this talent slip thorough your fingers while achieving your goals. Never leave writing at any point.π you are truly gifted β€οΈ May god bless you all the time β€οΈ
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You have just made my day even more after this beautiful comment! I am so overwhelmed by reading it because I have known people who estimate someone’s worth on the basis of age. Not talent! I am so glad you’re not one of them!
Thank you so much for these words! Stay blessed Di! ππ
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I am so glad to know that β€οΈ Not be rude but I have seen many adults who are very naive and still expect people to respect them for age. It made me feel that looking up to someone just because they are elder to us doesn’t work well. So I respect people for their mind and nature, never for their age! Anyways coming to you π You are really gifted and I wish you a very good luck kid β€οΈ
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This poem is just awesome… Great work, man. *Bows down*
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Whoa man! No need to bow down bhai! I am just a little panda! Hahaha
Your comments means a lot, it is more than anything! Thanks you so much! πππ
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Amazing . I wish i could write like you
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Trust me, Raoul, this is the best ever compliment I’ve ever had! Thank you so much bro! I am super glad you liked my work! π
Have a great day! π Bless you!
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I am happy you liked it and to be honest . It was amazing
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Powerful !!! A great poem π
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Hello, i read your blog from time to time and i own a similar
one and i was just curious if you get a lot of spam remarks?
If so how do you reduce it, any plugin or anything you can advise?
I get so much lately it’s driving me mad so any help is very much appreciated.
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I am genuinely grateful to the owner of this website who has shared this great post at at this time.
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This really struck a code …congrats . cos That’s what writer ought to do.
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Thank you very much for this amazing compliment! ππ
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