They were wandering in the woods. It was her favourite, for she thought that all the questions which arise in our mind or heart, the answers of them lie in the beauty of the nature.
Whenever she felt alone or found herself in a doubt, she would go in the woods to spend sometime talking with the birds who were sleeping in their nest high above the ground. Or she would discover a caterpillar and look at it in amazement wondering how unique every creation is.
But this time she was not alone, she was with him. No, they weren’t friends. It was a matter of fact that he found someone going into the woods and followed.
“What are you doing here?” He asked quietly, still measuring the height of the trees by his eyes.
“Spending time with my best friends…” She said softly, in a dreamy voice.
“But, where are your best friends?” He asked, still unsure about if she had any best friends.
“They are everywhere around you…” She said in a soothing voice.
He got confused and turned around, “But, I can’t see any…” He asked with his voice lowered.
“Don’t you think it’s impressive that the most beautiful of the things can’t be seen, only be felt?” She said, turning to him with her glittering, blue watery eyes…
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Hello everyone!
Happy Dussehra… May the victory of good over evil be always renowned! May all the negativity in our heart fades away.
I would love to know if you liked this post. Would you like me to continue it and read more if it?
I am waiting to receive your feedback and your comments!
Don’t forget to comment even if you forget to like…
Once Again, Happy Dussehra or Happy Vijayadashmi!
Have an amazing day!
See you soon…
Happy Dusherra to you too!!
She seems like a mysterious person. π
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Thank you so much for reading it and taking time to comment…
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Btw, do you know the story of Mahishasura Mardini (the reason why dussehra is celebrated as vijaydashmi in bengal)
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I know the little bit of the story of Goddess Durga victory over Mahishasura. π
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Is there something more to it? βΊ
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more to what?
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More as in, is there something else in the story that I might have missed?
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No nothing, I was just curious to know if you knew that story… most of us only celebrate dussehra because of Ravan Vadh… but there’s something more to it….
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Haha… Ok I think you’ve got your answer then. π
Happy Dussherra!! π
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yup!
Happy Dussherra to you too, once again! π
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well, that’s good!
π
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ha..feel much relaxed after walking through the woods with your words.. That blue watery eyes telling me something in connection to my todays post…
no doubt, you should continue this..
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Thank you so much!
will surely continue it because even I felt happy writing it…
π
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thumbs up.. just express your words in that freely flowing manner
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Sure! Thank you so much…
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Wooaaww… Nice thought
N happy dusherra to you too… ππ
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Thank you so much!
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Yes, I would like you to continue this. This was a nice post.
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Thank you so much Puneet Bhaiya!
Happy Dussehra!
may god bless you…
π
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Happy Dussehra to you too and simply awesome is your so touching post. The beautiful pic says it all. π loved every word. ππππππ
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Thank you so much! I am really glad you liked this post…
I’ll post the next part really soon…
You know what? After writing this post, I read it again and I wondered: was that me who wrote it? haha
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Hahaha it happens with me too with every post I write and then I too wonder. So we can actually give a apt to ourselves. π
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haha… sure!
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Hey friend I have nominated u for three days three quotes challenge kindly have a look at my post. π
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On the way to your blog…
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Thanks π
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Nice one,she is surely an interesting character:)
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yeah, even I think so…
she really is an interesting character!
Thank you so much! π
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Happy Dusherra friend ( I wanna know your name :))
Nicely written, I like the point where she answered about her best friends that the best of the things cant be seen but only felt. Yes, you should keep on writting.
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Happy Dussehra to you too!
My name is Harsh… (You know hindi right, HARSH means happiness other than rough or rude)
Thank you so much!
π
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Ahan, nice name it is. I know Urdu so its kind of similar to hindi so yeah.
You’re welcome.
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The most beautiful things are the sometimes unseen, what an amazing thought Bhai. I loved reading this very much. The imagery is great, use of words amazing and the message spectacular.
Great work!
π
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Thank you so much Bhai!!
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I am really glad you liked it…
π
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I loved it bhai. π
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Beautiful one dear π with ur simple narration i was literally among the woods talking to the trees. I was giggling at the boy’s question and searching around to see the friends π
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Thank you so much!!
I am really glad you liked it…
ππ
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π expecting more such attempts π
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Will try very hard to stand up to your and my expectations… ππ
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wow..thats the spirit :)…stand up for satisfying you first. never bother others…you r important rest of the world will come along π
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ππ so true..
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Again an amazing read. And yes, I want to read more of it. I like the point of getting all answers in nature, wonderful it is.
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ππ Thank you so much…
Sure, I will continue it…
π
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Waiting! π
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you should definitely continue this post.
I really liked when she said “Donβt you think itβs impressive that the most beautiful of the things canβt be seen, only be felt?”
And
Happy Dussehra to you too harsh βΊ
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Thank you so much!!! πππ
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Welcome.ππ
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Posted it’s second part…
Did you read it?
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Will read soon.π
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Oh yes do continue…. this is beautiful.. nature is my dearest friend! π
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πππ Thank you so much!!!
I am glad that in a world where technology is shadowing above us all, some of us do love nature…
πππ posted the next part too…
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I love all of your works but watery eyes is just so special to me! what a nice way to start my day! thank you for that!! π
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You’re welcome…
While writing this, Even I felt happier more than writing other posts of mine… This is really something special to me too…
ππ
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Yes I can truly understand why! π π π
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Please tell me, because I don’t know… ππ
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well maybe other stories are more of suspense and mystery and while they make for an excellent read this story of yours seems to be like a dream..its that magical experience that we all wish to feel you connect more so with it..its light and airy and draws even you the writer in. We come from the universe and nature so of course we shall return to nature to seek peace…at least that is how I feel over it. I just love the innocence and mysterious excitement that you have combined here!
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Wow, you summed up all my feelings for these particular posts…
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Yay!! i love it when that happens! haha! π
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Thank you so much!!!!!
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you are so welcome! π
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Now, I have a little surprise for you in the next blue watery eyes post… π
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eeeeEeee i love surprises! hahaha! π
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Hi Fab. I liked it. Do continue it.
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Hello Esther…
thank You so much for your comment!
I am glad to say that I have already posted it’s part two.. please have a look, I’d be grateful…
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You’re welcomeπ
Alright. I will.
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What a beautiful post ! Loved the little story you told.
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Thanks a lot!!
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I can relate so much to the girl in this post. I look for answers in nature as well. π²π
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Thank you so much for reading it… πππ
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This ones close to my heart cuz u involved nature over here. But yeah I like the character . she says she finds answer amidst wood. Like I do. Where else can u find the answers to all the turbulence inside .
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Yes, you are correct.
I am really glad you could connect with the character, Thank you so much for reading this and sharing your view…
π
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I will share more with time .. And yeah u have a good name too.. Forgot to mention .
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Thank you so much!
Btw, I would like to know your name, you know it will be a bit awkward for me to addrees you as theonlysup…
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U can address me as sup. BTW I’m supreet…
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Oh, nice name bhaiya… π
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Thanks dear. U called me bhaiya. It means a lot . π
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No problem bhaiya, I am glad I made you smile.
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Good Night.
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Emailed u dear
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I am glad that you continued writing more episodes of this tale. I am loving it. Very curious to know what will happen in the next posts, will he eventually become a friend from a stranger!
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Thank you so much for reading it!
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I love your style of writing… can’t wait to read more!
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Thank you so much!!!
ππ Now I’m really excited for your feedback… π
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I can’t keep reading now because I’ve got to go but I’ll read #2 once I get back… can’t wait! I’m so glad you liked my posts by the way
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No problem!
Have a great day!!!
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Thank you! You too! π
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I like reading fiction..And to read a series is really interesting..thank you for posting a fiction series..
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I am really glad you liked it!
I really hope you’ll like it further too! ππ
Have a great day!
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In the woods..It’s a perfect start..
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Thank you so much! π
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I like how the title is introduced at the end of the very first chapter! Lovely!
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That’s so sweet that you liked it! π
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Beautiful and instructive since we should always look inside ourselves to find the answers and there’s no better way to do it than walk into the Woods and watch the nature. I love the dialogues and how you ended your first chapter
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Hi!!
I am so glad that you took some time to read this series. I am really grateful!
I completely agree with you, there’s no better way than being with nature.
Glad that you liked it! π
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I really found pleasure in it and I am now Reading the 3rd one, haha… maybe I can read a bunch of them today
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haha, And I really get very excited whenever your comment pops up, haha
Thank you, π
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Thank you for your consideration to me and my comments π
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Wow fab start! You are a good writer!
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That means a lot to me, that also coming from an author!
I am super glad you’re liking it! π
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Wonderful dear β€ β€ I wish you a successful and happy year π π x x
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Thank you so much!!!
A very happy new year to you and your family! π
I am glad you came to read the 1st episode. π
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Your most welcome π π Thank you so much x x
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I hope you read the next episodes when you get time. I’d love to get your feedback. π
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I will π π x x
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Thank you so much!!!
Happy new year to you and your family!! π
I am glad you came to read the 1st episode. π
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Wow she sounds mysterious!
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Thank you very much! π
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Was definitely worth the scroll down to #1
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I am really glad you decided to read it!!
Thank you very much, will wait for your feedback! π
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I had to rush back here to start reading, I love it……she sound mysterious and scary!
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Haha, I am so sorry, but I am so glad you decided to read it from start!
I would love to receive your feedback on other episodes too, if you get time.. π
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I’m obviously late to this series but I look forward to reading through it. This opening ignites a reader’s curiosity and leaves them wanting more. Love the enigmatic quality the writing and narrative has!
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That means a lot to me, (your name, if I may ask?)
I am really sorry that you have to read it when I have put a full stop to this series, because this is the first draft of the novel I’m working upon. And I know it’s kinda bad, but it is just the first draft.
I hope to have some constructive feedback by you.
Thanks! π
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It’s nice for a first draft and I look forward to reading and providing feedback after I have finished my homework over the course of this weekend. And, my name is Gabe by the way.
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Thanks a lot!
No problem, I will be waiting for your feedback, Gabe.
Have a great day! π
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