Blue Watery Eyes! #9

He picked out two together. And after eating the one, β€œThey are.. so delicious. How do you make them so delicious?”

β€œShe says it’s a secret” Ash replied.

β€œDid my ears hear β€˜she’ just now?” Jason gave him a suspicious look.

β€œOh, there’s so much work left to do right now” Ash said rolling his eyes here and there. I shouldn’t have said that, he murmured. He knew that Jason will question him, but fortunately he didn’t, as he was busy in pleasing his tummy by the cookies.

Ash had a β€˜more than great’ morning, He couldn’t resist the urge to tell everything to Jason, about Aurora, how he met her, how he went to her house, how Jason was able to eat those crunchy cookies, and of course, about Alvin. He was still amazed at the thought of a broomstick walking to him and then flying apples. So many questions were revolving in his mind and he thought for once, to tell everything to Jason. But he didn’t quite like the idea, as he knew how he would react.

He realized that he woke up early in the morning, which happens very rarely, and his eyelids became heavy. Even after the sun was gleaming red in the afternoon, he went to his bedroom and he hardly hugged his bed when…

β€œNononono, you’re not going to sleep again.” Jason came, shouting in the bedroom.

β€œI am tired. Please, let me sleep, just for 5 minutes.” Ash replied with his face buried in the pillow.

β€œYour 5 minutes equals to 5 hours, Wake up! It’s Monday and we are already late.” Jason said and forced Ash to get up.

Monday? Ash jumped from the bed and realized that they haven’t been to the grocery store for about two days now. How could he forget about that?

They both were now walking up what looked like a hill, with two heavy bags on their back. Β As soon as they reached the top, they heard the voices coming from the busy market. The Amania market seems to be always alive due to the hustle and bustle which never ends. One can find everything here, everything he wants.

They both were walking through the passage, surrounded by different shops on either side. Ash found difficulty in preventing himself from crashing into someone. At the other hand, Jason was behind Ash who served him as a shield from the crashes.

β€œHello Ash and Jason, Good morning!” A voice of a lady came from their left side; they turned and found a neckless woman with chubby cheeks and with a butcher’s knife in her hand. The shop’s sign board read β€œMiss Malise’s Meat Shop” Everyone in the market knew about her. No, not because of her kind nature, but because of her witch’s laugh and arrogant behavior. But being the only meat shop in the market, the people were forced to buy meat from this meatful lady.

β€œHello Ma’am, but it’s afternoon.” Jason said with a frown.

β€œAfternoon for me, Morning for you…” and she started her witch’s laughing.

β€œJust ignore her.” Ash whispered in Jason’s ear and finally they reached their destination.

***

Haven’t read the precious parts? Do read them, now!

Blue Watery Eyes! #1

Blue Watery Eyes! #2

Blue Watery Eyes #3

Blue Watery Eyes! #4

Blue Watery Eyes! #5

Blue Watery Eyes! #6

Blue Watery Eyes! #7

Blue Watery Eyes! #8

Hello wonderful bloggers!

How’s your day going? I hope you’re enjoying!

So, Here I am with the another episode of Blue Watery Eyes! I am thinking to make this story darker and suspenseful, without losing the essence of magic and sweetness. So, I hope some support from you.

So, tell me. Are you liking the story so far? What are the things you want me to keep in mind so that I don’t commit mistakes while writing this. Because I really don’t want to spoil this story! And I know I will… *starts crying* *stops crying*

Please Don’t forget to comment even if you forget to like. Comment Anything, I just need someone to talk with.

Have a Wonderful Day!

See you soon…

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64 thoughts on “Blue Watery Eyes! #9

  1. Your imagination Harsh knows no bounds! its just incredible to me how you come up with these pieces that trail one after the next and all fit so perfectly all together! I cant wait to stand in line to buy your first novel! I will come back and read this story for as long as you write it!! πŸ™‚

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    1. You know Maureen, I’m not so emotional.
      But you know what, my eyes are watering right now, no I am not crying, I am strong Panda…
      You don’t know what you just said… It means the world to me… can’t use any emoticon (can’t find one who can express what I am feeling right now)

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      1. oh my goodness dear Harsh that is just so good! It means you know it is true!! my saying those words to you just set it off inside of you because you know it is true!!! Im even more excited for you now!! Yay!! Life is good my friend life is just so good! πŸ˜€

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  2. Broomstick walking towards and flying apples surely create the sense of amazement in anyone. And that lady, owner of meat shop reminds me the lady of Tom and Jerry, haha. A well carved story and everything is well explained. Very well written. Thanks for sharing πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ’Ž

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      1. Haha, exactly! When we are asked for any project, my first question when is the last date? πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. And a night before last day is the time. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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  3. All I could extract out this particular writing that you have a very indepth insight into the things, descriptions are vivid and you hold the things together…In a nutshell, You really have great potential to be a promising writer…Just keep imbibing things..read more and more..and believe me one day when your books go bestseller you shall remember a guy who said this to you long back!! Also Keep a balance between studies and writing, if writing is you passion it won’t ever drain away…But this time you have also to give your best in studies… I know that may sound ridiculous, but believe me in our society that is a reality… Keep Writingβ˜Ίβ˜ΊπŸ‘ All The Very Best… I shall be reading more of your post pretty soon..

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      1. Maafi ki kya baat isme? Sorry to vaise hi itna dangerous word lagta h mujhe, aise hi mat bola karo…
        Someone who cares for you will say these things and if you can’t understand that concern, you’re very unfortunate then.
        I’m fortunate to have readers who care for me Bhai!

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    1. Thank you so much for this valuable feedback.
      Yeah, I understand the studies part and trust me, I keep a balance between them…. thanks for the concern…
      And yes, true that society measures your talent with your marksheet!
      😊

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      1. No That may not be true these days. But just to keep yourself stable and support your writing you have to do that…not that because society demands..Even Chetan Bhagat worked for 10 years as an Investement Banker before he switched to writing fulltime. I hope you got it what I am trying to say…and it applies to me as well…as well many people out there…β˜Ίβ˜Ίβ˜ΊπŸ‘

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      1. Hey dear!! I’m great as always but just busy with the exams. πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ I still wonder, why do they exist even if we don’t like it πŸ˜› πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ How’re you doing?
        You’re always welcome!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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    1. Thank you for this suggestion…
      But I think that I will just take a try and after getting the response, I will see what to do..
      I really appreciate your support!
      Thanks for being my friend and part of my journey!
      Have a great day!

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    2. Thank you for this suggestion…
      But I think that I will just give a try and after getting the response, I will see what to do..
      I really appreciate your support!
      Thanks for being my friend and part of my journey!
      Have a great day!

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    1. Oh Di, that’s a tough question!
      Ash- this name was inspired by PokΓ©mon, I really loved his adventures that’s why!
      Aurora- Even though I am a boy, but hey, we also love Disney princesses stories!!! That’s why, sleeping beauty!
      Alvin- In Latin, it means friend!
      Malise- it is actually a misspell of word Malice… haha
      I hope you got the idea…

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