Blue Watery Eyes! #10

“Hello Ma’am, but it’s afternoon.” Jason said with a frown.

“Afternoon for me, Morning for you…” and she started her witch’s laughing.

“Just ignore her.” Ash whispered in Jason’s ear and finally they reached their destination.

Just in front, two stalls after Miss Malise’s Meat Shop, was “Gargabell’s Grocery Store” They both took a breath of relief after they dropped their bags from their back to the ground. As soon as they entered the store saying in unison “Good Morning, Uncle Gargabell”

A bald head emerged from the cashier’s table and slowly the raised eyebrows showed themselves, and finally the mouth, just below the crooked nose said -“Well, I would have wished you good ‘afternoon’ but knowing that your afternoon won’t be good anymore, I won’t do it. Both of you out and wear those costumes!”

“But dear sir, I don’t think it was our job. Dean and Luke are supposed to wear the costumes today.” Jason said, trying to lower his voice but unfortunately it didn’t come out low.

“It’s Great Mr. Jason that at least you know your jobs. Better remember the timings also next time. Due to Dean and Luke came at perfect 10’o clock, and you special boys came around 4 hours late…” Uncle Gargabell suddenly stopped and continued with her wide eyes, “Oh my special boys, Congratulations to you for you have broken the record of coming late. Sorry, Elle, these guys broke your record of 3 and a half hour.” He said turning his neck toward a girl, sweeping the floor. “So, I suppose both of you know your special prize”

“Great, now stand with that funny costume and sing that (he said something that made Ash elbow him) song in front of the whole market!” Jason said gritting his teeth and went inside the store to change costume.

After few minutes, they both (though no one could identify them) could be found standing on either side of the grocery store’s door. They both were wearing a teddy bear’s costume that had a wooden board around its neck which read “Expect more and Pay less!”

“You know what, Ash” Jason said from the teddy bear’s mouth which appeared as the only space for the air to get in. “Whenever I read this tagline ‘Expect more and Pay less!’ I feel it’s absolutely true. We expect more salary and he pays less.” Jason giggled on his own joke. But Ash was silent, for he was thinking that all was his fault, he neglected his responsibility which made his friend stand in the hot afternoon outside, and that also in that heavy costume.

“I am sorry, Jason. I mean, if I could have come at home soon, we wouldn’t have been late!” Ash replied.

“Couldn’t you think of any other heavier word than ‘sorry’? Well, no need. Actually, even after this ‘punishment’ I am happy that we made a new record of coming late. It’s a great reason for celebration. Don’t you think?” Jason said rather cheerfully. Ash smiled at him, and it appeared as if the two teddy bears were talking to themselves.

“Should I give you the lyrics of the song, in case you forgot it? I want Publicity! Now!” Uncle Gargabell said knocking at the window next to the cashier’s table, even though he was speaking through the glass but his voice was audible.

“Very Very Welcome to Gargabell,

Explore the things, that we sell,

Buy the food that is chosen well,

Feel the freshness as you smell,

Anything else that I need to tell?”

They both sang together to make the song louder in the market’s crowd rush, but with time, their voice began to get slower and slower until a shaky reminder came from the window. “I want Publicity, Now!”


Haven’t read the previous parts yet? *Holds the breath* Do read them now, or how will you get to know what’s happening here?

Blue Watery Eyes! #1

Blue Watery Eyes! #2

Blue Watery Eyes #3

Blue Watery Eyes! #4

Blue Watery Eyes! #5

Blue Watery Eyes! #6

Blue Watery Eyes! #7

Blue Watery Eyes! #8

Blue Watery Eyes! #9

Hello My dear Readers and Wonderful Bloggers!

How is your day going? I hope awesome, as always!

Well, Let’s celebrate! No, not for we broke the record of coming late but because today is World Hello Day! Hello!!!!!!! Hello!!!!! Hello!!!!! Hello!!!!!! (I think I am getting mad, I need to stop) So how will we celebrate? You just have to do this:

Go in the comment’s section and find a blogger who isn’t on your followings or followers list. Say ‘Hello’ to them! Let the new friendships begin!!!!!

So, time for a little surprise,

Thank you so much Priya Di for nominating me for this award! I am really honoured to get nominated for this award by such an amazing bloggers .

Friends, she is one of those sweet bloggers I really like to talk with. She is one of my genuine readers and a great blogger! So, don’t forget to visit her blog and follow her… 🙂

So, here I am with another episode of Blue Watery Eyes! I hope you liked it because I loved writing it!!! I would love to know your views on it, as always!

So, Don’t forget to comment even if you forget to like.

Have a great Day!

See you soon…



100 thoughts on “Blue Watery Eyes! #10

    1. Thank you so much Di!!!
      I am really glad you got the meaning of this update… I wrote this update specifically to strengthen their bond of friendship in reader’s mind… 🙂
      Had a big smile reading your comment…
      Happy Hello Day!

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      1. You’re always welcome! and you know that. 🙂 🙂
        There’s a particular day just to say Hello! :-0 . Oh lord! I hope, They don’t introduce a” Happy Goodbye Day”. 😀 😀

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      2. Ok Di, will get the meaning, leave it aside…
        You know Graham bell who invented the telephone, his wife’s name was Hello…
        So when he made the first call he said ‘hello’ and from then on… well you get the point!
        Hahahahahahahahahaha hahahahaha😂😂😂😂

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      3. Hahahahaha…. this is just a hoax but it’s not true. His wife’s name was not
        “hello” and infact, the first call he made to was to his assistant. The word “Hello” actually originated from the word “Hola”. 🙂 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much Kavita Di!!!
      I am so glad you like reading this series!
      Happy Hello day!
      Btw, I participated in that contest and told that you referred it to me… in reply they said that thank you for letting us know that Kavita referred it to you…
      So wait for your points, I wish best for you…

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      1. Don’t know about it! I just love to participate in such competition… but yes, I’ll be happy If I win the prize money and say to my dad ‘see, this is what you earn through writing, dad’ hahaha

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      2. Yes from your blog it’s my favourite one
        and check out my twitter timeline I share your post 🙂
        I shared it on linkedin as well. Best wishes 🙂

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  1. Your story has left me with a huge smile on my face! and now you are a songwriter as well!! Your talent is taking on a life of its own if you ask me! ahhaa! I also love your note to your readers at the end of each lovely your idea for us to make a new friendship are just so thoughtful Harsh I am glad to know you! 😀

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  2. “Whenever I read this tagline ‘Expect more and Pay less!’ I feel it’s absolutely true. We expect more salary and he pays less.” Simply marvelous and true lines and that old man sounds such a pompous mad chap, he just wants you both to work and keep on singing not bothered whether you guys are tired or not. So beautiful as always Harsh. Keep on writing and am waiting for the next episode, it is too good, I get totally enthralled into another space and time, into another world of make believe. So happy for you getting nominated for Happy Day and keep on making Happy and you too always remain Happy. Happy Day to you to dear sweet friend.

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    1. Thank you very much Di!!!!
      I am really glad you liked it…. 😊😊😊😊
      I am blessed to have readers and friends like you… 😊😊
      Happy Day to you too, though I don’t remember if I mentioned happy or hello, but yeah, everyday is happy. So let’s celebrate… haha

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      1. Hey Harsh who cares isn’t it, Happy or Hello the fact that it is so nice to say these words and yes for sure you are blessed, cause so many bloggers wrote such positive words and all liked your story so much. So keep on writing and we all r there giving you encouragement.

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      2. Haha, thank you so much for the encouragement…
        But just a promise, what ever you’ll say that will be true.
        I know I can handle negative feedback and I really welcome it so that I can get better…

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      3. Due to Dean and Luke came at perfect 10’o clock, and you special boys came around 4 hours late…” Uncle Gargabell suddenly stopped and continued with her wide eyes. Harsh I found the beginning a little grammatical mistake, has it to be Due or something other word and also it is Uncle Gargabell so it has to be him and not her with eyes open. Just check once more.

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      4. YOU OPENED MY EYES!!!! 😱
        how could I never notice it?????
        Thank you so much!!!
        That’s what happens when you have readers who are also your pro-editors… haha
        Shukriya shukriya…
        Will correct in the main script…

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      5. Will surely read twice before posting… as soon as I finish, ‘oh my god, its finished, let’s post it… and yes, you can say that this is actually in a draft form…
        I am so glad to have you as my friend Di..have a great day!
        Need to do homework… 😊😊

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      6. You know Hindi!!!!
        And I was like controlling my dialogues for so long just so that I don’t have to translate them in English…
        Well, I am dumb actually, if your name is Kamal, you must be knowing Hindi… haha 😂😂

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      7. No no, I really like positive ones, but I am saying that be honest, I mean, don’t think ki mujhe bura lgega coz indirectly ya directly help aap meri hi Karoge… but yes encouragement is sometimes needed… haha

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      8. Honestly, when I read the story its in too hurry that I didn’t notice but after that from your comment I get back and noticed. And truly I loved your real feedback that will genuinely help to be a better writer!

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      9. Haha, 😂😂😂😂 well, the world aurora and ash are in holds so much of dark secrets that even they don’t know. Except Aurora have the clue why she should not cross the Sanctus lake…
        😂😂😂 Excited?

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      10. Haha, it’s like we all interact without caring if the other will get offended by it or not… because we don’t and we know that!!! 😂😂😂
        I really have so many beautiful relations with all my dear bloggers here and it feels wonderful!!!

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      11. How did you know I was going to add chocolate house?
        Aurora’s father gifted her that house, hiding it by her mom because she would not let her eat chocolates too much!!!
        But, there’s so much going on, I will need time to set the things right, in proper parts…
        And yes, this story is right now in draft form… I think so… haha 😂😂😂 so I can do anything

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      12. You know I too feel like publishing my poems but not now after I write a few more, I was telling my son so he said have patience we will do so. What is your idea give me your true opinion and if you feel that it is not going very nice then do tell me and correct some of my poems too.

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      13. Awesome, though I am also not good at writing poems… (hate my vocabulary)
        No problem, I will do all the help I can…
        And yes, do publish when you feel you’ve done up to your best and you can’t improve it anymore… 😊😊


      14. It happens sometimes, not a big deal. But you should take care unless it will keep increasing but whatsoever it is frankly, I didn’t even noticed that, haha. But as a would be lecturer after 3-4 yrs I will not let you do these minor mistakes. Understand, haha!

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  3. hello harsh, i want a help from you!! i recently saw your story at fagnum….can you tell me how you mailed them? did you mail only the link of your story or directly the content…i too, have submitted but didn’t get any response…pls do let me know..

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    1. Well, if you have any query, you may ask them frankly…
      Now design a mail with:
      1. Title
      2. Content (make sure it’s more than or near 1500 so that you earn more points.)
      3. Author’s Bio (make it interesting for hiring purposes)
      4. Share all your social links.
      5. Contact number (optional)
      6. A pic of yours to put in front of authors bio
      7. An image for your. Article too.
      Anything else you can ask them, they are really good.
      I should have informed all my readers about this competition, how did you get to know about this…. well, whoever referred to you, maybe Kavita Di or me (anyhow) tell them that you got a reference from them, it will make that referrer earn extra points..

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  4. Beautifully written especially that song. I loved it simply as I do the every series of this story. You perfectly do justice with the characters and story. You are amazing little movielover 💕. Well done dear!

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  5. You know what…
    Writing stories which are realistic is an easy one because what we see, we write but creating a different world, placing your characters in them and then writing a story is something which is just way too good. It’s actually magical to see you do so.
    Rememeber, JK Rowling also did this. I haven’t read any Harry Potter book but she created a whole different world in her mind and it’s just pure genius. That’s why I honor about such persons.
    You are right on track buddy.

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    1. Hey, thank you so much for this compliment!
      I like to write stories set up in different worlds, my worlds because they are mine and I can do whatever I want.
      And yes, you should try those books, they are gems, truly!
      Thanks a lot!
      How’s your day going?


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