“Very Very Welcome to Gargabell,
Explore the things, that we sell,
Buy the food that is chosen well,
Feel the freshness as you smell,
Anything else that I need to tell?”
They both sang together to make the song louder in the market’s crowd rush, but with time, their voice began to get slower and slower until a shaky reminder came from the window. “I want Publicity, Now!”
They both were totally wet from inside, the heavy costume made it even harder to stand properly.
“Even Dean and Luke take break, why can’t we?” Jason put off the teddy bear’s head and questioned Uncle Gargabell.
“Because you both have broken the record of coming late, so you must be awarded along with the prize. Now, without any more question, I think you should wear that on and sing the song, otherwise you may leave, ‘forever’.” Uncle Garagbell commanded.
Ash knew that Jason would do something that will lose them their job and finding a job again looked like a very tough task, so he cooled down Jason and once again they both were standing out, singing the song. Though this time, Jason sang something else.
“Very Very Welcome to Garbagebell,
A place which is worse than hell,
Hope Garbagebell fall in well,
Don’t go near him, very bad smell,
Anything else that I need to tell?”
They laughed watching each other through the mouth of the teddy bear. But few moments of laughter couldn’t cool down the inside temperature. Ash was boiling from inside. He struggled to glance at the sky and found that the sun was now nearly setting but still the heat of the costume did its work.
Ash could feel his whole body sweating; he ran his eye over the crowd in the market which had lessened now. He scanned the area and suddenly his eyes spotted someone, an old man, assuming by his long silver beard and the thick stick as long as him. He had his face almost covered in the hood of the Dark cloak. Ash looked at him carefully wondering how unique his outfit was. The old man was now looking at him, as the old man turned directly towards him.
Suddenly Ash felt a cool sensation running through his body from tip to toe. It was as if he was standing in winter’s night. He turned to Jason who was also looking at him, “The temperature dropped suddenly, don’t you think?” Ash questioned Jason.
“Yeah, feels like I am no longer wearing this” Jason said in amazement.
Ash turned to find the old man, but he was gone. The old man who was standing there just few seconds ago, disappeared? Ash was puzzled.
Suddenly, Uncle Gargabell came out of the shop with a stern face.
“Both you may eat something now; I don’t want to spend over medications when you faint.” Uncle Gargabell said lowly.
“Thank you so much for your fake concern Sir,” Jason said gritting his teeth but one again Ash came in between and cooled down Jason.
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Haven’t read the previous parts yet? Do read them now, or how will you get to know what’s happening here?
Hello My dear Readers and Wonderful Bloggers!
How is your day going? I hope awesome!
So, let me first make an annoucement! ahem ahem…
It is to infrom you all that I have participated in a competiton, and yes you too can!
So, what you have to do is, click on the link Fagnum Leaderboard Here you can find all the rules and contact information.
But to clarify few things first, just my suggestions:
Choose your entry which exceeds 1500 words so that it have more chances of consideration and yes, extra critic points!
Design the e-mail like:
- Title
- Content
- Author’s Name
- Author’s Bio (make it a bit interesting)
- Author’s pic
- Contact Number (optional)
- Email ID
- Social accounts ID (Facebook, Instagram, etc.)
- If you like, you can also tell them that I (Harsh Jain) have referred it to you, the truth is, every reference will earn me points. 🙂 So, please!
Any other query, feel free to call their number or just mail them.
And yes finally, please check out this link once as it will add page views to my entry for the competiton!
Click on the link Blue Watery Eyes
So, coming to my recent episode, I hope you liked it! Would love to hear about it from you!!! And yes, one more question: Missing Aurora? haha
Have a great day and keep smiling! 🙂
See you soon…
you can definitely become a good fiction writer..
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Thank you so much for that Bhaiya, By the way did you clicked on the link at the end of the post?
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not yet. was interested in reading ur post first. i will check that in sometime
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But do that for sure, and yes I will be waiting for your feedback too, when you finish reading this episode
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thanks harsh . m aint as good as you but positively il give it a try 🙂
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It’s nothing like that… you too are a great writer, Is till do grammar mistakes…haha
😂😂
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I never cared about grammar. Bhavnao ko samjho
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Haha, I hate English Grammar even though I love English… It’s like I have always had a dislike for the rules, let it be rules for a language… haha 😂😂
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As long as u r able to convey the message. Its fine to do grammatical mistakes..
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Or fir bhi Na ho to Hamari Hindi zindabad… 😂😂
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Haha yeah .. How RU BTW
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I’m always awesome, aap batayie…
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Main bhi mast.. Yaha pe veg Maggie mast milti hain . wahi kha raha tha ..
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Naam nahi lena tha, lag gayi Na bhook… 😂😂😂
Chlo koi ni, maze karo…
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Haha. Sorry to spam ur comment section ..
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Haha, not at all…. I spam everyone’s comment section!!! 😂😂😂😂😂😂
Someone’s gotta spam mine…
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See how we mutually help each other .. BTW u can reach me thru email n phone as well
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😊😊Sure, I can mail whenever I like, I know that… it’s like I really struggle to find time to connect with my readers…
But no problem… 😊
Have a great day Bhaiya… enjoy your Maggie!!
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Bade log. Busy log
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Nothing like that Bhaiya…
School Se aakr thoda time dene ke baad homework and all… 10th ka student kitna pade ab… haha
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Padhoge likhoge to banoge nawab.. Hahahahha.. Arey have balance . don’t just stick only to academics..
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Beautiful as always Harsh, but a few mistakes like : “The old man was now looking at him, as the old man turned directly towards him.” In one sentence it k if you do not repeat the old man again, can simply write “The old man was now looking at him and he turned directly towards Ash.” Another one : “Both you may eat something now; I don’t want to spend over medications when you faint.” He said lowly. Because you have already mentioned his name in the previous sentence so then no need of repeating again to make it look more nice. Congratulations dear and will definitely look up the site and see how you have done. Too good as always.
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Thank you so much, will correct it in the main script!
I am really glad you liked it… and yes do check otu the link and you too participate, it’s fun and easy!
how’s your day going Di?
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Yes for sure will check out the link Harsh, all good, today I wrote a poem on life in the village and u too can check it out dear. Just seeing mails and few work in the office, how was your day in school.
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Mine day was not at all good, but awesome as always… haha Will surely check it out… 🙂
Are you missing Aurora in the story or you feel the story is being dragged, just to know your view?
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No I don’t think so but now go forward and describe another scene, where they are going and then what will they do next. Overall nice it is Harsh but do not repeat names if you have done them in the previous sentence. You know dear I too wrote a lovely story on A wandering Nomad and named him Zuma but am feeling a little lost in it so have kept in abeyance. I somehow made my daughter read few of my stuff and she is very good at English so she told me do not repeat names cause the gist gets lost.
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Yeah, and you know what, even I felt it once while writing that. But no problem, from now will surely consider this!!!
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Yes and I will be your good critic, hahahaha right.
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Read my poem, you will really like it is nice and simple not at all heavy.
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A good attempt.
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Thank you so much!!! 😊😊
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My pleasure.:)
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I am missing Aurora yes but you have made this story so much more! And still remains one of my very favorite things to read! Your funny song made me actually laugh out loud! haha!! Forgive it took me sometime today to get back here to read…I just knew knew knew I would love it!! You are in a competition? Will you post what you write for it? I hope I hope! 😀 😀 😀
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Well, tbh, I posted blue Watery Eyes only upto 7th episode… it was like ‘you can post anything that could engage readers ‘ go check out the link so that your view can earn me points…. thank you so much for this beautiful comment!
I am really glad you liked it…😊😊
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ooooo exciting! I will check it out! 😀 you are always welcome dear Harsh! 🙂
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Can I say something? Of course I can, but I may not. May I say something?
You always give me positive feedback and I’ve realized that all my readers give me positive feedback fearing that they’ll offend me… it’s not at all like this!
I welcome negative feedback, constructive criticism with all my heart.
So whenever you feel my story is going off track, being my reader, you have the right say anything, good or bad, I will welcome it…
Your feedback helps me to write better, you know that… 😊😊
I can’t thank enough to all my readers for their support…
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I have this thing my young friend where when I feel something it just spills out of me that minute. So anything I say here is just an immediate feeling there is really not much thought only feelings especially when I am excited about something hahaha! I am not able nor would I want to be to hold back! I have not one single thing of constructive criticism to say to you as it is I find you to be this absolute boy wonder and your writing to me could not get any better! Honest to goodness! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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This is so sweet of you….
I am really fortunate to have genuine readers and friends like you here… 😊😊
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did it!! Yay!! Good for you!!!
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Yeah! I missed Aurora, a little bit, only a little, haha. As Ash is doing a fantastic job so I am focusing more on him, haha. But exactly who is that old man with a cloak? And I truly truly loved that song. Overall leaving few grammatical mistakes behind, which Kamal has already pointed out, loved it. You know what , you are my one of the favorite blogger, writer little movielover 💕
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So you missed her, but so so so little… haha
Ohh yes the old man is mysterious!!! Very very mysterious… haha it’s like backbone of the history of their life…
I am glad you liked the song! Btw, which one? Gargabell one or garbagebell one? Haha
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You are my one of the bestest bloggers I’ve found here…
😊😊
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Gargabell. Aww thanks a bunch for such appreciationnnnnnnn, haha.
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Oh I thought you found Jason’s version funny because it was funny…. haha 😂😂
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The story line is great just like fairy tales thats why this is the best!
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Great work! Definitely miss Aurora. I have a feeling that old man could be related to her or maybe it was her in old man’s disguise helping the boy to cool down. Every episode triples my interest in this story!
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Wow, that’s a pretty great idea that aurora came in old man’s disguise to help Ash… interesting…
I am really glad you liked it!!!
Thank you so much… 😊😊😊
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the pace at which you are writing is remarkable
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Thank you so much!!!!
😊😊😊😊
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and harsh,i too participated in fagnum….i referred your name too…pls share and view….. 🙂
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Please share the link so that I can visit you…
I just need 6 more views to be at 15th pos… 😫😫😫😫
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yes sure,but it has not been published yet….btw,how to find out whether it is published or not? i hv got an email from them that it will be published in the evening
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Yes, they publish it after receiving the entry.. or sure it will publish, but after taking time… 😊
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entry means?? do we have to make some entry?? or mailing them the content and bio is enough??? sorry for bothering you with my questions…
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nana, I just meant entry as this mail only… no extra thing is required. by entry I mean the submission content…
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ohh!! thanks… 🙂
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you’re always welcome… 🙂
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You write so well Harsh, I’m eager to know what happens next.
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Omg ! You reached to 11th episode.. I need to get you fast.. Catch you slowly but..
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Loved it 🙂
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Thank you so much!!!! 😊😊
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Ahmm, another mysterious character on the way.😛
Btw, m missing aurora 😅
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That’s so sweet of you!
I am glad you read it till here, if you would like to read further or meet aurora, you may read the next parts, there are 5 parts more, read them when you like…. 😊
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Will surely read asap!😁
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Yup! 😊
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Awesome… 👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼
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Shukriya Bhai!!
I am really glad you’re liking it. Though I wonder of you like reading fantasy, you know magic stuff?
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Well, I love Harry Potter movies.. So I do like fantasies.. 😉😉
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Loved the rhymes! 😂
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Haha, especially the Jason’s version!!
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Yes that one! I’m surprised Deepz likes him more than Ash!
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“Fake concern”😂
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I was wondering Jason and Ash ,wat r they up to?I assumed tat they r students now its clear and I always felt bad for those people in these cute costumes and u have highlightened thr misery too ,good job,i enjoy reading this,v nice one and loved that 2nd song too 🙂
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Hello!
I am so glad you liked it. No they aren’t students, they couldn’t afford the education, provided only in the city. They don’t have any school in their town.
I am super glad you liked it!
😊 Thank you very much!
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