Blue Watery Eyes! #15

“How is Jason?” Aurora asked offering the cookies. “Why don’t you bring him here?”

“He’s good, he was just tired after we cleaned the house together, that’s why he didn’t come.” Ash lied.

“Has anyone told you before that your nose gets red whenever you lie?” Aurora said sarcastically.

Ash bit his lip, and his eyes were dancing to every corner of the room, he tried to say something, but nothing came out from his mouth, leaving him stammered.

It seemed as if Aurora sensed his nervousness, as she digressed. “Next time, tell him that Alvin has invited him for the cookies.”

“Certainly. By the way, you were going somewhere when I came here?” Ash asked, wishing to talk with her for some more time.

“I was just going to my garden; would you like to come?” Aurora said, rising from the sofa.

“Why not?” Ash stood up, excited to visit the yard again. Ash always found her garden, different. It actually looked like the flowers in the backyard could feel Aurora’s arrival, her presence. They rejoiced in her existence and grieved in her absence.

They both went to the backyard, which was as beautiful as a piece of land in heaven. Rose Bush made an arc that leads to the center of the garden, where bloomed the refreshing lilies. The delightful fragrance which adorned the place was ambrosial.

As soon as they walked in, the fallen leaves danced in front of their steps. Ash nearly jumped when he found it happening. He went near the corner, where the different colored orchids plants created something that looked like a rainbow.

‘It’s beautiful’ Ash thought and found his mouth to be opened.

“Ash, come here,” Aurora called him from the other corner.

Ash shifted his gaze and went near to her. “what happened?”

“You need to see this,” Aroura said without turning around, looking closely at something.

Ash came closer and what he saw was a golden butterfly, sitting on a violet lily. Its wings sparkled and glittered in the sunshine. Ash was amazed to look at it.

Aroura gently wrapped her hands around it, and brought it closer to her mouth and whispered something. She carefully moved her hand closer to him. “Make a wish Ash,”

Ash thought for a while, “I wish that her wish gets true,” He whispered.

As soon she opened her hands, the butterfly flapped its wings and flew, and started circling above the garden.

“It’s fascinating. Have you got a net? I need to catch it,” Ash whispered, looking above at the butterfly.

“No Ash, Don’t.” Aurora said, looking in his eyes. “Butterflies are meant to fly, to be free, not to get caught in a cage.”

Ash looked at her, “But… Can we follow it?”

“That’ll be fun.” Aroura nodded joyfully.

It was as if the butterfly heard their conversation, as it stopped circling the garden and flew straight into the forest.

Ash followed it, forgetting that he wasn’t allowed to go that deep in the woods. A part of his brain knew that he should stop, but he couldn’t. He kept following the butterfly, he didn’t even realize that he was now running downhill. Aurora tried hard to keep up with Ash, “Slow Ash, you’ll get hurt, ” but Ash couldn’t listen to her. And finally, he struggled to stop when the butterfly slowed down and landed on his wrist. Suddenly, the butterfly exploded into a puff of glittery golden dust in front his eyes which shook him and forced him to get back to the reality.

“Are you fine, Ash? You were so fast, I thought you would get hurt.” Aurora said catching her breath.

“Yes, I am fine and you?” Aurora nodded.

Ash looked around himself and found nothing except huge trees. “I have never been here before.” He found himself saying.

“So have I, we must get back,” Aurora said.

But before, they could turn around, a voice froze their steps.


Haven’t read the previous parts yet?

Blue Watery Eyes! #1

Blue Watery Eyes! #2

Blue Watery Eyes #3

Blue Watery Eyes! #4

Blue Watery Eyes! #5

Blue Watery Eyes! #6

Blue Watery Eyes! #7

Blue Watery Eyes! #8

Blue Watery Eyes! #9

Blue Watery Eyes! #10

Blue Watery Eyes #11

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68 thoughts on “Blue Watery Eyes! #15

  1. Haha.. I was right,she knew he was lying. 😀
    I loved the update, the part with the butterfly was so mesmerizing, I could imagine it happening in my mind. Now, my curiosity has reached its peak to know what happens next and whose voice is that!! 😊😊❤

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    1. Thank you so much Di!!!
      Your comment gave me that idea otherwise I was going to write something else, so thank you for that!!!
      I am really glad I could maintain your interest, stay tuned, will reveal tomorrow whose voice is that!
      But whoever it will be, it will be surprising! 😊😊

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      1. It’s always a pleasure to read your story!! I love your story, I don’t know how many times I have said it but I can’t help it, I so love it!!❤❤
        Hahaha.. You got the idea from my comment, that shows how brilliant you are in weaving a story and as a blogger, you know if you have thought about something else but put someone else thought into consideration too! So I am humbled! Thanks to you too! I didn’t know you have thought something else, may I know what was it if you don’t mind me asking.
        I am eagerly waiting for the surprise!! God bless you my dear brother!! 😊😊😊
        So sorry, for this long comment and for future long comments too! 😁😁

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      2. Haha, never mind saying stupid things on my blog, all of us are stupid, atleast I am!
        Excpet the fact that whatever you say is far from being stupid…
        You don’t know how much your comment helps me, it fuels up my desire to have my novel completed and this is a great thing in itself!!!
        So thank you for that!!!
        Thank you bohot formal h Di, main apne friends ko thank you nahi bolta!
        Well I just thought to ignore Ash’s lie and keep the story moving but you said it, and I found it interesting, showing that Aurora knows about him.. and yes, his nose actually gets red, just kidding…

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      3. Hahaha… At least, you can have all the fun being a crazy stupid person, so yes, I love being a stupid crazy person!! 😁😁😊
        Let’s not be formal, meri taraf se “badi wali jaadu ki jhappi” to you!! 😊😊

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      4. 😂😂😂😂
        I’ve magic powers, can reshape and resize my body parts!! 😝😝😁😁
        Good night dear brother!! Have dreams of the person you love the most!! 😁😊😊

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      1. Thank you so much!
        Even I felt like that, writing that. That’s why I wrote it was like a piece of land in heaven.
        I am really happy you liked it Di!
        But stay tuned, the next episode will reveal whose voice was that… 🙂

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      1. Well I am not the right person to say how they are because Not as intelligent to give a verdict..

        But with whatever intelligence I have , I loved it thats why continued reading since yesterday .. 🙂 and as i said now looking forward to the next one’s

        and Please don’t SIR me .. you have a great day toooo ..

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  2. Magical.. Completely magical. And I loved that butterfly instance and how beautifully she told him to make a wish. But I guess, an another secret of following steps is waiting to be revealed soon. Good work and an amazing storyline skills. 💓💓

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  3. oh my goodness!!! This is my favorite! I am such a fan of this story Harsh! and I know I keep telling you it just keeps getting better and better but truly it really does!! Excellent skills you have! 🙂 🙂 🙂 A golden butterfly! I could totally picture the whole thing!

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    1. And I become a fan of your comments, haha…
      Your comments really encourages me, I want say that, all the comments I receive, may it be positive or constructive criticism, it just reignited the flame of writing in me…
      and I am grateful to you and all my readers for that!
      Thank you so much!!
      Have a great day!😊


      1. The pleasure is all mine Harsh! Your writing is crazy good I will read anything you post! It just makes a person feel good a story like this especially I love, its got all a great novel should have! Mystery, magic, admiration, a few secrets, a collection of a wonderful imagination! I love it! 🙂

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      2. You should be excited that is what life is all about! Let it excel you into the next stage! I see it in you Harsh and I am never wrong about these things! 😀 😀 😀

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      1. I find writing fictional story very tough because you have to create different characters.
        I got this idea of story on the night of 24 when I was in bed just waiting for the sleep to overtake me. I am hopeful to stretch it into a dull fledged story.

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  5. What’s great about your writing is that you don’t bluntly pour the magic into Aurora’s character but deliver them is so many indirect ways. The magical garden lighten up at her presence.. the butterflies. The dancing leaves.. magnificently put together!

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