Blue Watery Eyes! #16

Ash looked around himself and found nothing except huge trees. “I have never been here before.” He found himself saying.

“So have I, we must get back,” Aurora said.

But before, they could turn around, a voice froze their steps. Ash looked at Aurora, with a question in his eyes “Did you hear that, too?” Aurora nodded that left no chance for any misconception, they both heard that voice.

They stood there for a moment, without making any sound. Ash intensely concentrated for the traces of that voice again, but it never came. Just before Ash lost all the hopes of finding the owner of the voice, he heard the voice again, this time clearer. It was not just a voice, it was a yell. Someone was crying out of pain, and Ash could bet that someone was in great trouble.

“I think the voice is coming from there,” Aroura said pointing downhill in the woods. “Let’s go and find out, someone might need our help,” And she walked down, deeper into the forest.

Ash hesitated to go down further deep in the forest, but Aurora left no option for him as she was already walking down. He followed her.

As Ash struggled to push away the pointy branches coming over his face, he could hear the cry getting louder and louder. His steps went faster than before, crunching the dry leaves and branches on the cold soil.

Soon, Ash and Aurora stopped when the yell was the clearest. “From there,” Aroura walked toward the huge tree, from where the voice was coming. Ash followed her, as soon as he turned around the thick trunk, he gasped.

What he saw was someone, whose kind he had never seen before. But before he could make out who it was, Aroura came and sat down on the ground next to it.

“Ah, my leg!” It groaned in pain.

Ash looked at its leg, but the orange liquid over the ground grabbed more of his attention. He realized that its leg was bleeding orange blood. For once he took a step back out of fear, but he looked at Aroura and bent down and picked up its leg very lightly and slowly.

“Ahh, What’re you doing?” It cried.

Ash ignored it, as he looked carefully at the wound. A sharp stone had pierced its foot. Ash couldn’t help hesitating, for he was helping someone whose blood’s color is not even red! Aurora looked at him with requesting eyes, to relieve it from the pain.

“Hey, look someone is there!” Ash nearly shouted looking at the sky.

As soon as it looked above, Ash pulled out the stone from its foot.

“Ahhh!!” It gave out a shout and grabbed the grass at its side. The orange blood was oozing out of the cut rapidly; Ash looked around himself to find anything to stop the bleeding.

Aurora tore her white lace dress from the end. “Let me do it,” She wrapped it around the injury whispering, “Don’t worry, you’ll be fine,” She carefully tied the knot around its foot, loose enough to not to hurt it more.

“Would you like to try to stand?” Aurora said, holding its hand.

Finally, it tried to stand up, on one leg.

It was when Ash observed how much short it was. It couldn’t even reach his shoulders. It wore a green cap on his redhead (the cap couldn’t hide its pointy ears, and hair which was coming over his forehead. Its big brown eyes were attractive. “What are you?” Ash couldn’t help asking.

“I, Aiden, am the son of king Gildas. Thank you for helping me. Now I must go. I owe you one, and I’ll surely pay this debt.” He said, adjusting the belt on his waist.

“You should not compare our help to debt, little master,” Aurora said, still sitting on the ground to talk with him, on the same level.

“I don’t ask for help from enemies, young lady.” He said with a pain in his voice.

“Enemies? Why? We aren’t your enemies.” Ash said.

“You’re not my friends either,”

“We can be,” Aurora said, reaching out her hand looking at him in the eyes. “Friends?”

He stood there staring at her hand, and reached out his smaller hand, but to refuse. “I can not trust you, even if I like to,” He said and left.


Haven’t read the previous parts yet?

Blue Watery Eyes! #1

Blue Watery Eyes! #2

Blue Watery Eyes #3

Blue Watery Eyes! #4

Blue Watery Eyes! #5

Blue Watery Eyes! #6

Blue Watery Eyes! #7

Blue Watery Eyes! #8

Blue Watery Eyes! #9

Blue Watery Eyes! #10

Blue Watery Eyes #11

Blue Watery Eyes#12

Blue Watery Eyes! #13

Blue Watery Eyes #14

Blue Watery Eyes! #15

Hello, wonderful bloggers!

How are you? I hope Great!!

I am really sorry for being late in posting this episode! But finally, I defeated the writer’s block (or whatever they call it, but it is no less than a demon) Have you ever faced a writer’s block? What do you think about it? share it in the comment’s section!

I hope you liked this episode, please let me know your feedback or there will be no point of sharing this here. I trust my readers, so be honest with your feedback!

Don’t forget to comment even if you forget to like!

Have an awesome day!

See you soon…

59 thoughts on “Blue Watery Eyes! #16

  1. It was wonderful but I think in the instance of helping King’s son you have used it instead of he. And the logic of orange blood is wonderful and the way Aurora torn her dress just like a TV heroine, haha. Overall lovely it is!

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    1. I have used it before they knew who it was, and when they got to know his name is Aiden, I’ve used he. I hope it didn’t look strange.
      Anyways, I know it was dramatical, but that was the only way to stop him from bleeding, haha. She is strong, haha…
      Thank you so much for your feedback Di! 🙂

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      1. Don’t know, it is yet to come! I hope I win the prize money this time!!!! *Fingers crossed*…
        It will be the best moment for me to show my dad that I earned through my writing, through doing what I love!! 😊

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      1. I meant that it was already so interesting.. I didn’t think it was possible to make it more interesting than it already was but you did it anyways.. I meant that as a compliment…

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  2. Good and wonderful story again dear and the ending was very good u have kept all your readers on tenterhooks that why Aideen is thinking they r enemies even after they so kindly help him and give a hand of friendship too good. I did not find even a trace of wrong English except Aurora spelling mistakes r there. Fantastic dear did u invite your thoughts for tea.👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👌👌👌

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    1. I am so glad that you liked it Di!!!
      Haha, I like suspense.. and secrets…
      I tried so hard not to misspell her name but again I did… anyways, thank you for letting me know…
      And yes, I invited my thoughts for a party and then they helped me, after eating the cake… 😂😁😊😊


  3. I will never be able to wrap my head around how you can do this!!! and Im okay with that! haha! I will read these stories on and on until you end and then when you make this novel I will buy it and read them all over again!! i love all of your characters so much but truly Im just in love with Aurora!! I feel like I know her! Thank you so much Harsh for posting! as far as the writer’s block I prefer to call it ‘down time’ its a less scary and less negative way of looking at it so you kind of take away its power over you. I also find if you can ignore it and just keep busy the words will come back when you least expect it! Seems to me you have a good control over things though that is for sure!! 😀 😀 😀

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    1. Thank you so much!!!
      I am really glad you loved it, I’m so excited when ever I read your comments, maybe because they always bring a smile to my face, a wide smile… haha
      That’s a great way to explain writer’s block, will keep that in mind for future, thanks a lot!!
      Have an amazing week!
      Christmas coming soon, I can hear the jingles even now, their sound getting closer and closer… 😊😊

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      1. Yay!! Christmastime! Today we had a first real snow storm! It was perfect! Snowed all morning and wasnt too cold just under freezing so thats not bad here, then warmed up and started melting and will be all gone by the morning haha! that is just how i like it! 😀

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      2. I have never seen snowfall in my while life!!!
        I know that it’s beautiful, it’s like the best moment, like god sending cute little snowflakes down upon you to show his/her love…
        I wish I experience it some time! 😊

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      3. aw that makes me want to video a snow storm for you! I love to be outside when it seems as if the whole world has stopped Im the only one out there and its so quiet i swear you can hear each flake touch down! it really is amazing to see! You stand with your head turned up and watch all the flakes come rushing at you almost could make you dizzy! its beautiful I really hope you get to see it in person some time. Good night friend im off to dream! Have a great day!!

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  4. Orange blood! 😄 hahaha… It is something unique and exquisite!! 😊😊 And about Aiden, I’d love to about his kind, please don’t make it a suspense too!😰😝
    I loved the update absolutely! But, honestly I think, you can write better than this! But please don’t take me wrong, I really love your story!! 😍😍
    Writer’s block! 😥 don’t want to talk about it! Going through the same myself!! 😔😔

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    1. Haha, suspended are good! Hey Di, I am glad you liked the update!!! 😊😊 Thank you very much…
      Btw, I am glad that you’re honest, but I just need to ask one thing, do you mean that what I wrote earlier was better than this, or you’re saying that I must keep getting better than before and i am not…

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      1. It’s always a pleasure for to read your story!! 😊😊😊
        And If you have asked me, then your writing on your previous posts was better. Because, it always thrilled and excited me to know what happens next. This one also, but not that much! I hope I didn’t offend you, and I am really sorry if I did! You know whatever you write it will always have the harsh’s awesomeness in it and that is what makes it unique and fabulous!! I can’t even imagine these kind of things that you do! It’s so amazing!! 😊😊😀
        Love you and your writing dear brother! God bless you!! 😊😊😊

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      2. That’s so sweet of you Di and hey forget about offending me, I don’t get offended by true and honest feedback! And I am grateful that I have such readers who help me,
        Thank you dear sister!
        May god bless you too!!? 😊

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  5. Harsh, this is getting goOod, I want to know why he can’t be friends with them.. but yes waiting for the next part. I’m glad I returned to co tinue reading even though I have an exam around the corner.
    I’m liking aurora’s character, she seems fearless, kind and caring.

    Thank you.

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    1. Hi,
      First of all, thank you so much for stopping by my blog, I am really grateful for that!
      Second of all, that’s awesome that you liked my work!
      It would be wonderful to get your feedback on this fiction series, if you like to read it from start, you may reach the first episode and do let me know if you liked it…
      Thank you so much!
      Have a great day… 😊

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      1. Haha I’m grinning at my phone! I was under the impression that you were a girl, but this creativity, patience to build up episodes, magical use of language from a guy is phenomenal! Hats off to you Harsh ji!

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