Blue Watery Eyes! #35

Just a quick recap of the episode #34:

In yesterday’s episode, we saw Ash and Jason finally meeting Aurora.

Ash stammered while talking to her, and Jason was there to complete his sentences. While Jason was exploring her house, Aurora went to help Alvin.

Let’s see what happens next!

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As soon as she was gone, “Who is Alvin? I’d thought that she lives alone.” asked Jason, elbowing Ash.

Ash chuckled, “Alvin is a mystery to me, even now. I literally jumped when I saw him, or I should say when I did not see him. He is Aurora’s friend, that’s what she calls him. And the reason why you can’t see him is – he is only visible to her. Yes, he’s invisible.”

Jason was astounded, “That’s amazing!” Just like what mom told me in her bedtime stories.

 

“I hope you’re enjoying yourselves,” came Aurora with a tray in her hands, that she carefully put on the table. “Ash told me that you liked these cookies, would you like to have some?”

Jason’s lips were stretched as he smiled, and picked one. He was thankful. “Thank you very much. Even Ash told me so much about you,”

Ash went red, and silently elbowed him. Aurora saw that and giggled.

“May I ask you something? Jason asked very politely.

Aurora nodded.

“Your friend, Alvin… I just wanted to ask… You have an amicus?”

Jason knew he was stupid to ask such a question, how can an amicus exist in reality. But whatever Ash told him about Alvin, this can’t be happening.

Ash was bewildered when he heard Jason saying that word, “You know what an Amicus is?”

“Yes, Alvin is an amicus. It’s great you know about him. Most of the peoples living near this town aren’t aware of these magical creatures. I wonder how you got to know about him.” said Aurora impressively.

“My mom used to tell me about them. But then they were just part of those stories, I never knew they were real. They were my favorite.”

 

Alvin was listening everything. Though he knew that evesdropping was bad, but when you can be invisible and the topic of the conversation is ‘you’, the idea of evesdropping doesn’t seem so bad. Alvin stood by the staircase. Suddenly, as he tripped over the marbles that fell from his pockets, he faltered and lost the balance. He grabbed the stool placed next to him, and before Alvin could realize it, the glass vase fell from the stool, and shattered into pieces.

The noise of shattering glass shook the three of them. As soon as they turned their eyes to the pieces of the shattered vase, that lied on the ground, Alvin went nervous. But before Aurora could stand up to help him, Alvin snapped his fingers.

All the broken pieces of the vase rose from the ground, as if they were floating in the air. The re-arranged themsleves in the air, and the vase was back again on the stool. The water in the vase that was spilled on the floor rose up in the form of water beads and then the flowers got back. And the vase was there, as it was before. As soon as Alvin corrected his mistake, he rushed over the staircase and went up with the speed of the wind.

 

“Was that… was that him, over there?” Jason couldn’t have been more excited.

“Yes,” Aurora said, “I will just come back, I hope he didn’t get hurt.”

Ash, too rose from the sofa to go and see her. But Jason pulled him down, “You’ll make it worse. Amicus used to be very shy in the stories, you might scare him.”

Even though Jason stopped Ash, he also wished if he could go to see him. But he knew that will just make the matter worse. Amicus are very shy in nature, and they find it extremely difficult to trust people. So Jason thought it better to just sit there and hope Alvin was fine.


268 thoughts on “Blue Watery Eyes! #35

  1. The recaps of the previous episodes are great idea!

    Wow Jason knew about Amicises, the story really is widening in favor of Jason bringing out his wisdom and the loyal genuineness hidden under his quick temper!

    Description of the shy Alvin was so cute and the magical fixing of the mask was imaged beautifully!

    Bits and pieces of Jason’s mom also adds warmth to the story!

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    1. Vaasstewart gave me that idea, I thanked him for that. He said that recaps will make it easier for readers to catch up with the story.
      I am really happy that now your perspective towards him is changing, but yes, he is quite short-tempered but that is just because of the unfortunate event in his past life. It’s like, Ash has always been there to wipe his tears and that’s why he values him so much! moreover, Ash is the only family he has!
      I am glad you liked that description, I think I’m improving in my writing skills.
      Yes, I added that element to show the warmer side of Jason, because I didn’t want him to be appeared as a “self centered” or egoistic person.

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      1. Vaas is a pro now cause a great writer got him into blogging! 😋 *ahem*

        Great twist on Jason’s character and whatever you are hoping to bring out from his hidden past is working greatly!

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      1. How i wish i can disagree with you DeeDee! But I guess i have to agree with you.. not that he’s a “sweetheart” but he isn’t as mean and moody as I interpreted him to be!

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  2. Harsh this is a good way to start so that we can know what has happened before. Loved the story again and the part of Alvin was awesome. I too love these type people and as Jason he is quite of strangers and so told Ash not to go near him and also the magical way the vase that was broken to pieces just quickly was restored. Great dear. Keep up the next episode.

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  3. the shy alvin was eavesdropping…..hmmm…. I feel little alvin likes Ash and Jason, but Jason more 😛😄
    Please tell Jason, I love him!!!!! He’s wise, funny, at times dramatic… bole to ek dum jhakkas!!!!! Love you, love him and love this story little brother!!! or I say little author!!!!!❤❤❤

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    1. Even I feel so! It’s like he will take time trust them, because Amicus don’t trust humans easily. You’ll get to know why later!
      And Thank you So Much!!!!!
      😍😍😍😊😊😊😊😊
      Panda hugs sent to you too! 😊

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      1. Hahaha.. achha ji mere saamne itni smartness!!!! Beta ji aapne th phd kar li hai blackmailing mein aur jaha se ki hai vahan ke trustee hai hum…. Samjhe kya…. 😝😂😂😂😉

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      2. Gaur se dekhiye is masum chehre ko… Is masum chehre ke piche chupa hai ek shatir dimaag jo kisi ko blackmail kar sakta hai… Savdhan rahiye.. Surakshit rahiye!!!!! 😝😝😝😝😂😂😂😂

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      3. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 I am laughing like crazy right now!!!
        Seriously, that’s what happens with me too!
        Whenever I talk with you Di, I am like ‘afraid’ of not letting that thank you escape my keyboard! Otherwise god knows kya hoga! 😂😂😂😂😂😂

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      4. I’m crazy don’t you know!!!! There’s a tiny winy difference between crazy and mad…. So yeah! I’m not mad but crazy for sure!!!!!!😝😂😂😂😂

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      5. Huahaahahahahaha……… There’s no match to my level of craziness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!infinity 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

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      6. 😂😂😂😂😂 You just have to worry about one how much crazy you have to be to talk to me!! 😛 😛 😂😂
        But Seriously, I missed your presence on my blog’s post! So thought to ask you about it!!! 🙂 🙂

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      7. Awww… god man… don’t get me emotional now.. come on…. I missed you that’s why I asked okay.. It wasn’t like Oh, how dare you not comment on my post.. So, don’t take it too seriously but you are sweet guy!! Muah!

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      8. Mr. Mysterious here told me you came up with the name Queen Dee! I like that… And I understand it! But how do I remind you Oggy and Cocroaches Please enlighten me!!! I am very curious to know!!!! 😂😂😂

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      9. Are nahi Di, I didn’t name you Queen Dee.
        It’s like Miss dark Ji use to call you DeeDee, I just said that it reminded me of him. That name reminded me of him.
        Deepika as a whole reminds me of my favourite actress, you know that!

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  4. I love it!!!! I love the way that you are able to keep the reader reading. I love your use of words and your description of various things in the story!
    The characters are developing beautifully!!! The way that you express emotion and feeling through the characters makes me feel like I am them!!
    ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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    1. Oh my god, you actually read all the episodes in one go!!!!!!!!
      That’s so amazing, and it means a lot to ms…
      But I am really sorry for taking so much of your time, I hope I didn’t waste your precious time.
      I am so glad that you liked it. But it’s so unfair that this is the last post of the series of “blue watery eyes”
      Please forgive me…
      I hope you liked enjoying with Ash and Jason and Aurora. 😊

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      1. No problem!!! I am a born reader. If I could, I would live in a library!!! So continue writing because your stories are awesome!!!!
        Oh and ya…I do read all the episodes in one go…I’m the kind of person that won’t put down a book or story until I finish it!! Keep up the good work!!!!👍👍👍👍👍

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      2. Oh, that means there are so many people like who still inhale books instead of oxygen!!
        I love it!
        By the way, I just wanted to ask you, I mean… I am so grateful for all your appreciation, but if you could just be a bit picker and point my mistakes and give me constructive feedback, That’d be awesome!! Because I can’t just spot my mistakes, a reader can from her different perspective… please?

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      3. Yes I am CRAZY about books!!
        Ok….so the tip I’m going to give you is to try and respond the most important and nagging questions that the reader has while reading your story, while at the same time making the story seem mysterious and unexplained…also, if you want to write an unexplained or unfinished story instead of asking for reviews in the comment box, ask for story finishes invented by us!!! I don’t know if this is a helpful tip…but it’s the only thing that came to my mind right now…😁😁👍

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  5. I love the name Amicus. Alvin is really cute. You have beautifully described the water forming into water beads and then getting back to it’s original form in the vase.
    My only doubt is you have written ash went red and elbowed Jason, aurora saw that giggled. You always say ash nose turns red whenever he lies. So my thoughts went directly to it. And my best wishes for the book harsh. Sure it’s gonna come out really well. All the best.

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    1. I thought that I will make him go red, that will show that he is embarrassed a little. But no problem, I will correct this things make the story even more flowing after the revisions!!
      Even though I don’t have anything to say other than THANK YOU, but my best wishes to you! 😊😊😊😊
      Thank you so much!!! 😊😊😊😊😊

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  6. Dear Harsh,

    Yesterday Jeni told me about your ‘blue watery eyes’. It’s a intricately woven intriguing peice, I tell you.
    The peacock earrings, the brilliant thought of him watering the garden with the water in the bucket, the appearence walking broomstick, (my eyes almost popped out), the ‘four-two hardworking boys’, Jason’s story, and his appearance in line light, and most importantly, ORANGE blood 😉-all these little things are so beautifully penned, I tell you. I’m interwoven with new questions and curious thoughts about the characters.
    Just an excellent, mind-blowing peice. Is this (35th) the last one? Also, please allow me to like bomb you as a token of love for this write up.

    I’m off to the Sanctus lake in the deep dark woods of umbrane forest. 😉

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    1. Oh god, you guys shower sooooooo much love that I don’t know how this morning could be any better… Jeni di is always sweet!
      I am so glad you liked it. This was a series I had started when you were maybe somewhere else in this world, and everyone liked it. And even I wanted to take this forward because Fantasy is Life! So after 35 I stopped posting but I never stopped writing it… but I will be honest, right now it’s just paused… With this new series coming in for which I am equally excited (The story of Avin who lost colours from his life) but I have come too far in the former one, so I am just a little scared that I will spoil it now… But you guys, have been sooooooo supportive and caring that I have to finish what I started, and I will…
      It’s such a delight to hear from you that you liked my world and characters! I’m halfway through making it a novel, so I will definitely complete it now!
      Thank you so much! And Thank you Jeni Di! 😊

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      1. I’m so glad I made your morning.

        I’m waiting for the further parts of this unusually wonderful piece Harsh! I’m a lover of fiction and fantasy. Jeni, is a wonderful reader and an absolute dearheart. I’m so thankful to her because she told me about these writings, and to you, for it would be an understatement if I told you this was superb!

        Have a nice day 🌻

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