The scars are still there,
Reminding me of my past,
The memories that we used to share,
Alas, they did not last.
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The times when you cared,
Bring tears to my eyes,
But you left my soul bared,
Now only emptiness lies.
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I never knew this was destined,
I loved and you betrayed,
Shouldβve known my love was blind,
Now all I wish is you to fade.
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That moments still haunts,
When you left me alone,
My heart still wants,
You on its throne
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I want you back,
After all that you did,
A never-filling crack,
Where my soul is hid.
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And the Master is back… πππ»
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Hahaha, but seriously, did you like it? I mean, I would love to get your feedback on it, since I am not so good at poetry.
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Liked it?? I loved it πβ€…
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Thanks a lot! π
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Welcome π
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Are you both siblings? π
First time harsh has written something like this. And you write Aldo poems about love and all..
So I wonder… π€π€
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Hahaha, nothing like that, Di! But yeah, you can call us brothers!
I just tried something new, I hope you like it? *sweats nervously*
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Like you both being brothers? Turn on the fan. It’s summer, don’t sweat too much πππ
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But still I am worried if you liked it?
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You know, you should not be worried if people like it or not. You should write it for your satisfaction. π
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Maybe!!ππ And this isn’t the first time that I’ve written Aldo poems on love and etc etc…ππ
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I think I am on maun wrat π€π€π€ ππ
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lol, hahaha
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You’ll be on maun wrat then what will to happen to our blogs, who’ll give us lovely reviews suggestions on it then??ππ
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Nope. Remember the conversation we had this morning?Aapne kaha tha ki kuch nahi bolna hai. So maun wratπ€πΆππ
Lovely reviews?ππ Me?
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Honest reviews are what I see as lovely reviews ππ… That was for calling me Poet not otherwise ππ
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But you are The Nocturnal Poet right? πππ
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Yup I’m ππ
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haha
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Wow Harsh come with a bang and they sure r tears of the soul. Deep words of a heart in tears. Awesome
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And here’s your lovely comment!!!!!
I am soooo happy to have your love in the shape of comments that you leave at my posts! I am so glad Di that you liked it!!!!
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Absolutely a stunner to your poem so now we shall join it and mend it what say, I told u Harsh u write beautifully from your heart
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You are so sweet, Di!!! Thanks for all the love and the support! π
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Welcome dear
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So sad, but so good =) Welcome back!
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I am superglad to be back!! Thank you so much!!! π
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Awesome tha, yaar.
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Thanks Jeeshan!!! Means a lot Bhai!
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Hmm, I know. Good luck on yoir journey mate.
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Welcome back harsh. that moment still haunts when you left me alone. Lovely lines .
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Thank you very much!!! I am so glad that you liked it!!! π π
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Ah last your officially back!π
Awesome poem!! 1st poem I read from u i guess π
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haha, might be. After starting blue watery eyes, it took over my blog! But now I am free to post whatever I like, though I loved posting blue watery eyes post!
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Yea a mix up is good!
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Hey!It’s great to see your comeback with a good piece of work.
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Hello, valiant soul!!!
I am so glad you liked it!! Thank you so much! π
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Keep on writing the great thoughts.Cheers!
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Thanks! π Have great tomorrows!!! π
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Beautiful it is..π
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Thank you soo much!!! πππ
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A broken hearted piece of poetry from you is like magic Harsh!
First time I’ve seen a poem of this charm come from you! Loved it heaps ..and I’m honored to see you return! Wp was like a barren land without your rays of joy sparkling here and there!
“That moments still haunts,
When you left me alone,
My heart still wants,
You on its throne” beauty! π
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And I was laughing that I haven’t ever had a broken heart still I was able to write it… But I am glad that you liked it, feels so good to hear this from you!
Your darkness is spreading its magic! πππ
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Don’t jinx it now sugar pudding .. I hope that pure little heart never breaks!
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That’s so sweet of you!!! π I hope same for you!
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Harsh..who is that soul which made my little friend cry…hmm…time to act..
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That’s so sweet of you, Di that you care, but nothing like that happened to me! π
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Good then…enjoy the vacation
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It’s such a beautiful poem ……
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thanks a lot!!! π
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hello Harsh how are you ??
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