The Blind Illusion! #4

“Then pray to god to give you the strength, to watch your friend evaporate to death” said Estern, clicked his lighter and a flame evolved around it’s tip.

The girl didn’t blink, but her eyes reflected the fear. “Don’t do this to me. You can’t.”

“Try me, I can” Estern said with a smile. “Caleo” whispered Mark.

The flame on the tip of the lighter swirled and rose weaving a ball of fire. The blazing ball floating in the air brightened the room evading the darkness in the cell. With a smirk on his face, Estern said “Farewell”

“Stop it!” the man roared. He tried to snap out of the chains, but even his muscular body didn’t do him any good. “I’ll tell you! Leave her alone!”

“Tell me where that scum is hiding.” asked Estern, with the ball of fire still revolving in the air.

“We don’t know. Yesterday night, when we were surrounded by the police, we decided to diverge. He went towards the west.” said the man, looking in Estern’s eyes. “That’s all I can tell you.”

“Maybe you can tell me something more. What good did it do to you to perform these spells on yourself, you knew it was forbidden, didn’t you?”

“We knew it very well, right from the beginning. But we trusted our leader, it was the part of our plan. It was a requirement to prove our faith in our leader, that we will do what he says, without a question. Out of everyone who wished to join him, we were the only ones who passed the test of faith.”

Estern was surprised, ‘how can someone be so foolish’ “What do you mean by everyone who wished to join him? Are there others included in this?”

“They were, now they are dead. They betrayed the leader and took a step back when it was the chance to prove their worthiness. Idiots! They deserved it!” said the man, spitting on the ground.

Estern’s eyes were widened, his eyebrows were raised. ‘Who is this leader? Did he murder all of them?’ “What is the plan that you’re talking about!?” asked Estern, raising his voice.

But the man remained silent, staring at the ground.

“Speak whatever the devilish plan your leader is working on!” shouted Estern.

“I don’t know. He never told us.” whispered the man.


“There’s light in faith that is hard to find,

but the faith with darkness makes you blind.”


Read the previous parts:

The Blind Illusion! #1

The Blind Illusion! #2

The Blind Illusion! #3


Hello, my dear friends

Even though the summer is around, but I can still feel the rain somewhere hidden in the clouds, waiting for the right time to sprinkle the drops of happiness around us! 🙂

I hope you are enjoying this series, your feedback really means a lot! Your comments are really appreciated!

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Have a great day! 🙂


30 thoughts on “The Blind Illusion! #4

  1. “There’s light in faith that is hard to find, but the faith with darkness makes you blind.”

    Your quotes are like the toppings that make this series pizza yummy to my tummy!

    You should never keep your readers waiting and I’m excited how you keep the flow of the series.. this secret leader.. the magical ball of fire and the storyline is all in a perfect blend..

    Looking forward for the next part!

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    1. I love it whenever someone quotes a piece of my writing in their comment!
      Thank you so much for this amazing feedback!
      Yes, I won’t make my readers wait too much. Every episode will serve its purpose and won’t be dragged, I promise.
      Will post the next part tomorrow!
      Thank a lot!!

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  2. “There’s light in faith that is hard to find,
    but the faith with darkness makes you blind.”

    Sometimes, it’s light that makes you blind and darkness shows you the path that leads you to your destination.

    Your imagination is FUCKING AWESOME😍😍..
    I’m​ just out of words… I… I’m.. I’m speechless.. Seriously..
    Your episodes are making me more curious. Waiting for your next post…🙃

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    1. Your comment just made my day Bhai!!! It was sooooooo nice to hear these things from you!!!
      And yes, you’re absolutely true… Not everytime blind faith is a failure!
      I am so so so glad you liked it bhai!! And I hope you have taken up a book to read. 😂😂
      Will post the next part tomorrow, as usual… 😊😊
      I hope you’re liking the turn of events in this series.

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      1. I haven’t took any book yet. But I promise, I will start reading soon.

        Yeah I do like the turn of events. Making some guesses too. Let’s see if I’m right about them or I’m just trying imagine a totally different story..🙈🙃

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      1. Let’s end this for once and all​.. My name is Suraj. 🌞
        You would have known my name by now, only if this app showed our blog the way we’ve designed it (that is, with so much of love). But here only posts are shown and nothing else.

        And now the help thing… You’re already doing the best you can, that is, by posting an episode everyday. So, we can only wait for the next episode. 🤗

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      2. Hello Suraj Bhai!
        I liked that little sun that you put there, lol!
        You are absolutely correct bhai, the design and time that we put in our website customizing it, the reader doesn’t show it. Just posts and nothing else.
        My name is Harsh, the alien panda! I hope you knew that!

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