The Blind Illusion! #17

Psycho Prophet’s Grave!

Estern’s blood was raging with anger, he shouted his heart out “To heck with this ‘Psyco Shit’ and to heck with your bloody God, why the hell don’t you leave us alone!?”

Without any slight expression on his face, the Leader sternly pulled Esetrn’s hand that had been branded with the word ‘Bow Down’ And whispered, ‘Kizania’

Suddenly Estern’s vision was blurred and finally blackened. He could feel like his body was flowing in a dark sky, without any stars, any source of light, just complete darkness, nothing else. His body was getting so light that he could almost feel it getting away from him, his arms were stretching. In the endless sky of nothing, he could see his own body shining bright, leaving him. The next moment, he caught a glimpse of something, a light glittering like at the end of a tunnel, and Estern was closing his eyes to once again fall in the same dream. And suddenly, he woke up, as if pulled back to the reality.

There were no longer any metal walls, neither the paintings, the roof also might have shrunk, for he was standing somewhere that felt so familiar, like a house.

“This is where that ‘Psycho Prophet’ used to live.” A silent voice broke out from the dark corner and Estern found the leader emerging from there. “Welcome to my home.”

“What do you mean by ‘your home’?” Estern felt his voice shaking.

“I am his child, the one that his classmates used to call ‘Psycho’s Son’ remember?” The leader said with his hands crossed. “Now without wasting anytime, do as I say. Pick up that shovel and come with me.”

What the heck was going on? This man is his son! What will he get from digging up his father’s grave!?  But Estern did as the man commanded; he picked up the dusty shovel from the corner and pulled off the spider’s home. But before he could look at the leader, he was already heading towards the backyard.

Estern followed him, and the leader stopped at a place. “Under my feet lay my father’s grave. Dig it out.”

“What will you get from that!? He’s dead, what might be left of him are just bones or maybe nothing at all!” Estern reasoned.

“Without any question, do it!”

Estern started digging at the place where he pointed. Sweat was dripping from his nose, as the sun melted down in the sky above. The dusk had fallen, and the moon had appeared by now. And suddenly, Estern felt something; he picked up the shovel and looked at its tip painted with blood. Estern used his hands and dug out the earth. “What the…!” he exclaimed in horror.

“You told me he died 20 years ago, how is it possible for a body to remain as it is, without decaying!?”

The leader who was standing on the ruin, said without taking a notice of his father’s corpse, “I didn’t let him die, not completely.” He said with a calm voice, “Now turn him upside down, you might be able to see some sort of symbols.”

Estern couldn’t look at the face; he turned the body with his trembling hands. The moment the person’s back faced him, Estern took a step back, the whole skin was tattooed with abstract patterns and designs. It was painted like a canvas, with no space to fill anymore. Estern could see a symbol tattooed right in the centre, and he could swear it resembled the sun.

“Now put your hand upon the sun on his back, before the dusk ends.” The leader said lighting up the cigarette that he held between his fingers.

Estern put his palm on the person’s back, with water dripping from his face, but this time, they were tears. He wiped his eyes with his other hand and wondered why these tears were falling. And no sooner, the symbols moved. Like a painting was alive, and the symbols relocated themselves, and suddenly the tattooed sun broke into two and split apart, revealing a message that was shining so brightly that Estern could hardly look at it directly!

At the sight of the light, Leader dropped the cigarette and ran to Estern, and stood in front of him with his eyes closed.

“What does it say?” the leader shouted!

But the letters were too bright, and the two pieces of the sun were gradually getting back at their place, to rejoin again.

“Spit it out, you scum! The dusk is ending! It’s the last piece, and I have to know it!” the leader was shouting on the top of his voice.

But before the sun could get back and trap the message, Estern focused and the letters got clear.

“Kill your earthly desires. For you have to walk this path alone. Get past this Blind Illusion!”


Hello, friends. Sorry for making this post long, but I had to end this scene in this episode only, instead of dragging it to another episode. Hope you liked it! 🙂 Your feedback is really appreciated, so don’t forget to leave a comment, even if it’s just a ‘hello’ 🙂

Have a great day! 🙂


47 thoughts on “The Blind Illusion! #17

    1. Congratulations on being the first commentor! 😂😂😂 Lol.

      Oh my, look who’s here! I thought you never liked this genre, and there is no bigger pleasure for me to have you enjoy this genre! I am super glad you liked it Di!!
      Pippo for the compliments! (I literally backspaced that T word!)

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      1. Yeah! I don’t like this genre.. that’s true. But I do read your post….I won’t say.. I like the genre but this particular post!!😊😊
        Piplipo!! You deserve it and you know it!!😊😊 and you didn’t say the T word…That made me really happy!!! 😄😄

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  1. I liked the ending. But not ending as a whole, just the ending of this post.
    Actually, I don’t like endings which leave me guessing what happened next.. Like what happened to Julia? What happened to the Leader & Estern?

    And why did the symbols move while Estern placed his hand on that sun?

    Pardon me, if I’m ignoring some obvious inference. Like I was unable to make the guess yesterday too.

    Nevertheless, you still deserve to be commended for how brilliantly you made the blind illusion (The title of the series) play its role in the end.

    I enjoyed it. 😊

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    1. But it’s not the final episode! 😂😂😂 No Bhai, I just mentioned that I wanted to complete these scene in this post! Picture to abhi baaki hai bhai! 😂😂😂
      I’m laughing so hard reading your comment!!!
      Well, you’ll get to know about the symbols and the meaning of the message in next episode!

      I just want to add the ‘Blind Illusion’ in the end because it’s the last piece of the puzzle! 😊😊

      Thank you very much for this amazing comment!! 😊😊

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      1. Oh man! I was eating rice and they literally launched from my mouth.
        For your reviewer’s respect, shall I delete your comment, Sir? *salutes* 😂😂😂😂😂
        I am laughing from morning!! And you’re making it even funnier!! 😂😂

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      2. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 Let me EAT!!!!!
        And don’t worry, nothing’s gonna happen like that! People will still enjoy your review…
        And again I am asking, shall I delete it? Though I don’t want to because it’s so funny!!!

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      1. Sorry for that Bhai! For losing your interest. I know I am irresponsible for not posting regularly!
        But hey, atleast I post them! (Pun intended) 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 (I want to marry this emoji)

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  2. Ohh man! This is the best! Forget my previous declarations. Wow! That puzzle thing I wonder why you chose sin as the symbol? As evil usually like nights when its all dark but I would dare not make any assumptions just yet. Maybe psycho god symbolises all the goodnes that’s why. But an amazing piece. Great

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  3. Starting off.. I love the image and how this episode begins with a topic!

    The kizania description was absolutely phenomenal.. I could feel myself floating through the darkness just by reading through the lines..

    Making a reader picture the situation is one thing but if you could write in a way that makes the reader *feel* that they are in that moment.. then bro, you’ve nailed the shit outa that price!

    Wonder if this episode gave Dalji boo goosebumps! Gotta read through the comments and find out..

    Moving on…

    Blood? He didn’t let him die completely.. Woah.. I love your imagination yo! Such creativity is all you need to become an amazing fiction writer…which you already are so congratulations!!

    The leader smoking a cigarette was somewhat unmatched to his whole attire I had in mind..

    Like I’ve said before.. I can’t handle the amount of excitement I feel when I read the title of something in the writings.. I could literally cry in joy!!!

    “Kill your earthly desires. For you have to walk this path alone. Get past this Blind Illusion!”

    You nailed that conclusion like no other writer would ever be able to! 😭👌

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      1. It’s a bit difficult to post regularly. Because sometimes writing 200 words is like a huge jog, and at other times, writing 1000 words even don’t look much. I am sorry I lost your interest in between. 😅😅

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    1. Let me just fill a bucket with tears for receiving such a comment of this length! 😭😭😭😭 I am crying!!

      I thought that I should give the topic at the first, it sounds more cool, glad you liked it.

      😍😍 I am super happy you felt like that. Mission accomplished.

      You don’t even realize how much your words mean to me, and if you do you then know that they just fill me with sooo much motivation and excitement!! I can’t explain in words how happy I am.

      I think it’s getting hard to do that. I have given up. May be he’s not enjoying my series as he used to before. But no worries, his comments and feedback still light up my day! 😊

      Thank you very much!! My happiness is out of limits right now, lol Gotta eat something to calm my excitement! Lol

      I just wanted to portray him as a character who doesn’t care even if his father grve is getting dug out. So I though what would he do then? Just stand there? Let’s give him a a cigarette, lol 😂😂

      😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 I can’t put my happiness in words!!! And I am feeling so bad for it! Thank you very much!

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