My heart lies buried,
Under the sands of past.
The time when we cared,
But good times never last.
You left my soul bared,
A wound that never heal
Now my heart lies scared,
Now, he could never feel
All are the lies, promises are broken
Our bond was ripped apart, by the words unspoken.
How much I wish, to have those moments back
But the fear still grows; you’ll turn your back.
Would you hold my hand, the way you did before?
Or am I just holding on to a fake swore?
Though I want you back, I hope you never return.
For my heart is in flames, can’t stand another burn.
Only if I could know the smile was an illusion,
Still you’re my angel, I live under delusion.
I thought you would come, and make me whole
But all you did is, scratch scars on my soul.
Now you’re just a memory, I remind every day.
That you’re long gone, no words left to say.
If life is a book, can’t I tear this chapter?
But I just can’t.
If my heart is the prisoner, you’re the captor.
Loved it especially the lines
If my heart is the prisoner, you’re the captor.
❤❤❤
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Thank you very much!
I am so glad you liked it! 😊
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Welcome😊
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Wow Harsh! This is amazingly beautiful! ♡♡♡
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Thank you soooo much! I am super glad you liked it! 😊
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Long time since I heard from you.
Hope you are well!:)
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It’s been so long, yes. I am super fine. I hope you’re doing great too!
Thank you very much! Hope you liked the poem. 😊
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It was a stunning piece once again I loved the imagery!
🙂
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Thanks a lot! 😊😊😊
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Sure!:)
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Oh my god! Oh my god! Look who’s back… 😄😊 I missed you so much little brother… Infact, I have emailed you a few minutes before… How’re you Chota packet bada dhamaka? 😊😊😄
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I am sooooo happy to be back again, Di! It’s just been a month, but being away from you guys felt like soooooo long!
I am awesome Di, as usual! Lol How are you?
You emailed me? Let me check again.
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Exactly…. It feels like it’s been a looooong time……
I’m fantastic!!!!! But Why did you take such a long to post…if I may ask..
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Long story short… I had so much of syllabus to catch up, and writing something was like an extra burden, not an escape from studies. So I couldn’t write good stuff. Now finally, exams are over. Things are falling into their places. So yes, I am back. But I am sorry I may not be very frequent Di! 😅
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Bechare bacche… 😂😂
No worries!! Just give us a heads up before you go MIA.. 😝😁
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MIA? matlab? 😂
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Apun Bole toh total gayab re…😂😂
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And this poem just stole my heart❤❤… But I hope you’re not facing something like this in real..
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Haha, nope… By your grace, lol, I haven’t faced something like that yet! 😂😂
I am so glad you liked this poem! 😆 Won’t say the forbidden word!
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Hoo… I’m relieved and happy to hear that.. 😊😊😄 because I can never imagine you like that…😄
Ahh…. You can say it… I’ve stopped reaction to it now…😃
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This is beautiful 😀😀 good to hear from you after so long!!
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Thank you soo much for your comment!
I am sorry for being away for so long. 😊
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It’s okay panda ji 😀 my pleasure !!
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What a beautiful poem!! After long time with such a marvellous comeback !! Each and every line of your poem is speaking!!
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Thank you so much for your support!! I am so glad you liked it! 😊😊
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My pleasure
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Firstly….
*Though I want you back, I hope you never return.
For my heart is in flames, can’t stand another burn.*
Wow. Just brilliant as always!!!
Secondly….
Dude! Where the hell have you been??????? I was also on a break but yours was so damn long!!!! I hope everything is fine! Missed you!
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It’s that amazing feeling when someone quotes something from your write up and put it in a comment! It feels so good! Lol
Forgive me! I know I took a little too long, but please don’t blame me. Everything is just as awesome as it must be! Missed you too!!! 😊
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I am not blaming you little bro. I know you were stressed because of your exams. On top of that, this poem had me a little worried. Good to know that everything’s okay. 😇😇
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Haha, this poem made you worried about me. On a serious note, I feel grateful to have such friends here! 😊😊😊
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Haha…the feeling is mutual!
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To love and yet shy away
Break apart and still wanting to stay
To be someone’s angel
To give yourself away
I know the stories are different
I wish the ending weren’t the same..
That was so awesome!!!!
As always you blew my mind and inspired me to write!!! It is so nice to read your work and know that i am friends with such an amazing writer.
You’re awesome bro
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Now I can proudly say to everyone, that there’s a blogger whom I know virtually, and I have met her in reality too. Lol!
‘I know the stories are different,
Wish the endings weren’t the same’
(First time I’m quoting someone’s comment) It’s soo nice to have your feedback, BRO! 😂😂😂
I am glad my words inspired you, means a lot!
Me too!
You’re awesome too BRO! 😂😂😂
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And that’s what we call a grand comeback!!!
I loved the poem. I like it more beacuse of the rhyming scheme that you’ve maintained throughout the poem. And I know it is quite difficult to compose poems with rhyming words. So, Well done.
Apart from that, last stanza was my favourite. Too good. 👍
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As always, your comment brought a huge smile on my face bhai! Thanks a lot!
Frankly speaking, I find those people brilliant who weave the poems without any rhyming scheme. But I am glad you liked it!
😊😊😊😊
Sorry for being away for so long!
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Amazing Harsh. The passion in those words is rolling off in waves. Keep it up
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These words mean so much more when they are coming from you!
Thank you so much for paying a visit to my blog, and for such an awesome feedback, very much appreciated!
Have a great weekend! 🙂
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Welcome friend
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Thank you! 🙂
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LOVED IT.
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Thank you soooo much bro! 😊
After so long, feels good to talk to you.
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THANK YOU for writing something that I feel daily.
And welcome back.
I have tagged you for…maybe 1or 2 awards… please check them when you get time.
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You’re welcome Bhai! 🙂
Thanks for tagging me, I’m highly grateful to you! 🙂
Hope life is easy on you now! 🙂
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There’s another coming dude…go and check that one too😂😂
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Beautiful.. well crafted.. there is pain and love..
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I am so glad you liked it bro!
Thank you so much! 🙂
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Kya hua bhai????? After such a long time!!!
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Nothing bro!
I am sorry for being away for so long! 😊😊
How are you?
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im good…..was wondering where did you disappear…how is life? lots to study??
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Such beautiful lines😍
Just amazing!
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Means a lot, Sandini!
Thank you very much for taking time to read this!
And also, official welcome to my blog, lol! 😊😊
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This was really something different! And even through it really saddened me, it was beautiful, something that’s going to stay with me.
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I am so happy you liked my poem! Your comment means a lot!
Thank you very much! 🙂
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And thank you too for providing us with such original and great content!
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In that case, you’re most welcome. LOL
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This is so beautiful and touchy touchy…
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Thank you soo much! 🙂
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Ouch!!!it pierced in through, there. Your poems, aah <3. Words fall short to appreciate how splendid this is!
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It means a lot, Muskan! Thank you so much for taking time to read it!
I am so happy you liked it!
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If life is a book can’t I tear this chapter.. OMG these lines though!!
You are an amazing writer! 🙂
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That means a lot Di! 😊😊🙈🙈 Thank you very much!
I am glad you liked my poem! 🙈🙈😂
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Beautiful to read. Cheers
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Thank you so much!! 🙂
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Beautiful 🙂
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Thats a masterpiece…good one girl
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Thank you very much! I am so glad you liked it.
p.s. No girl. haha
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Oopss…M sorry for that !
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No worries, lol!
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Omg Harsh! This is really amazing. Loved every bit of it! 💯💯
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THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! 🙂
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