Everyone picked me up, packed in a square
And I kept staring, “They are taking me where?”
Tearful were eyes, and some were dry
But no one smiled, I wondered “why?”
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The sky was raining, but sun was bright,
Isn’t it strange? something wasn’t right.
They came to a halt and laid me on ground,
Unlocked the coffin, and that’s when I found
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My face all white, life was all gone,
It was my body my mom was crying upon
I went to wipe her tears as I used to,
But why did my hand just pass through?
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People dragged her away, from a dead son
But she cried for I was her midnight’s sun
Never to be seen, never to be felt
Alone I left my candle, for her heart to melt.
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I saw them burying me in the land
And my father too lent one hand.
Dark was swallowing me inside this place
Until I met a light at end of this race…
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Well this is a masterpiece…
Dude you make me feel like I’m a nursery class student….🙈🙈
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Hahaha, everyone says that my rhyming scheme is really childish… It’s like a nursery class poem, that rhymes all the way!
Thank you sooooo much bro!!! And again, congratulations for being the first one, lol!!! 🙂
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Well then “everyone” would be really great poets…
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Hahahaha, “everyone” might be… lol
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Goosebumps!
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Thank you sooo much!!!! 🙂
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Simple lines though made me sad. You could make a story of it instead of rhyming, the emotions would sound more deeper then.
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That’s absolutely true! Even I was thinking about it, and I did exactly the same in my recent post. Thanks a lot for reading this!! 🙂 Hope you like the new one, written in a short story.
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😀😀😀I’ll check out soon
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Sure, Thanks!! 🙂
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Awesome
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Thanks a lot. man!!!! 🙂
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Oh boy how can you write like this! Tooo gud. But she cried for I was her midnight’s sun. Never to be seen, never to be felt. Alone I left my candle, for her heart to melt.
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Thank you sooo much!!! 🙂 I am so glad you liked it! 🙂
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You’re welcome.
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Ahggh…the feels…….😮😮
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This poem reminded me of my brother’s death a few months back…
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I am so sorry. It breaks my heart to know that you had to read this after all that has happened. Really sorry.
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Please never write this sorry word again. Infact I’m sorry to mention it here.
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