The flower I saw that day,
hidden in plain sight
as if seeking a shelter to play
Hide and Seek in the night.
The petals were wilted,
yet the fragrance flew
her inside beauty
was more than true.
I lost her again,
before I could say
“I found you, now
it’s your turn to play”
Years passed,
without her eyes
what a farewell it is,
if there aren’t any goodbyes?
I met her again,
under the moonlight
she shone like a star,
but the falling one at night
She came close,
put a hand on my heart
How did I ever live those days,
when we were far apart?
Neither of us said a word,
under the autumn tree.
She closed my eyes and whispered,
“You found me.”
How sweet. Love truly plays the game of hide and seek.
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Thank you so much! π
I am so happy you liked it, and so humbled by your lovely words.
Have a great day! π
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My pleasure π
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Wow, this is amazing!
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Thank you so much! Glad you liked it. π
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This is amazing!
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Thank you so much! ππ
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This had a wonderful melody to it. I found this to be my favorite line
“I lost her again,
before I could say
βI found you, now”
Very touching write. Keep it up. π
-Renee Verona
rarityofparadise.com
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I am grateful to you for reading my works and liking it along with leaving such humble words as motivation for me. Thank you so much!
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Wish you a very happy day.
Best wishes, Harsh.
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Anytime! π
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Was wondering where Fab Writings went to in silence.
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I tend to hibernate. Lol
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Hope you’re doing all well. π
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Am great buddy.A little work here and there but all good.How have you been?
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I have been super good, was caught up in filling application forms to apply for college.
I so wish I manage to get in a good one along with my desired choice of course. But my high school result is yet awaited, so I am studying whatever I can for any entrances I may have to write.
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But life is awesome! ππ
Thank you for asking.
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You are welcome little bro.Glad you done with your high school and congratulations for the same.Well if you just cleared high school with that kind of imagination then maaan!! You are gonna go places if you put your back into it….All the best with your quest man.All the best.Sky is the beginning….
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Thank you for all the best wishes, sending the same to you virtually! π
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Haha…thanks..virtually….I love that.
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Ooooh boy,You make fantasies play out in reality…this is some deep shit!Good poetry is hard to place a word on…deep and sincere.Keep it up bro.
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It’s so nice to read whenever your comment shows up!
I am really glad you liked it. Thank you so much!!
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Have an amazing day! π
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Anytime bro.Honestly if you lived nearby I wouldn’t give you any peace.I don’t like when friends go quiet….
You are a blessing bro
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πππ I don’t know what to say…
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I am just grateful. It’s mutual brother! π
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Hahahahahahah then stop hibernating!
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That’s so sweet.
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Thank you so much for taking time to read, I’m really grateful.
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Hope you have a great day! π
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You are most welcome. U too have a great day. Keep posting.
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I’d say simply touching.
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It’s such a pleasure to hear from you, sir!
I am glad you liked it. Thank you so much. Have a great day
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Hello Harsh.. how are you ?
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Hello, I am doing all well.
How about you? π
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Happy Day
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well i am good..
so whats Going on ??
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I’m big fan of anime and i loved the poem as wellπ€
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Blissful poem dear Harsh and it touched my soul too and finally you found her. The picture is so beautiful. Keep on writing these wonderful poems too good.
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