Blue Watery Eyes #3

Ash couldn’t understand why Jason didn’t see that girl behind him.

“And where did she go? I wish I could know her name, at least.” Ash said.

Ash tried to keep him busy but why he wasn’t able to keep her out of his mind? He wondered. “Maybe she’s meant to be there.” He told himself.

“Jason, I’m going out for a walk. Will come back soon.” Ash said.

“Yeah, until then, may I eat your snacks?” Jason asked cheerfully but Ash didn’t mind.

He got out and sat near the bank of the Sanctus Lake. One could find him throwing pebbles in the crystal clear water, and then he caught a glimpse of a bright beautiful golden fish. His eyes followed it until the fish was gone.

The shining sun was now setting in the arms of the clouds. Ash didn’t realize that his time had passed so fast.

He stood up and decided to go back but wait, what was that? Did he really see a girl on the other shore, the same girl that he met before? He turned around and yes, she was there.

He rushed and crossed the old-looking wooden bridge over the Sanctus Lake.

“Hey, wait!” He said panting.

She turned around, “Hi, I am glad to see you again.” She said with a soft smile that made Ash forget his name for a while.

“Where did you go, then?” He asked the question that was upsetting him the most. “You just disappeared.”

“I didn’t left, I was there only.” She said slowly in a soft voice.

“Oh, maybe I didn’t see you.” He paused. “I am Ash, What’s your name?” He said, and extended his right hand gathering all the confidence he could.

“I am Aurora.” She said in a dreamy voice, and extended her right hand, too.

He didn’t even notice that her hand was cold as ice, for he was mesmerized by looking in her eyes. Suddenly, he realized and came back into real life.

“What a beautiful name! By the way, where do you live? I live with my friend Jason just at the other bank of the river.”

“I live there” She said pointing towards a beautiful small hut inside the thick forest, decorated with flowers and surrounded by what looked like a very small but beautiful garden.

“Who do you live with?”

“I live alone,” She said calmly.

“I am sorry; you may feel lonely at times, don’t you?” Ash felt bad for her and tried to show his sympathy.

She smiled that confused Ash even more than before. “I said I live alone but why should that mean I may feel lonely? There’s a different between two, Ash.” She said in a comforting tone.

Ash realized that he was staring at her while thinking about what she had just said. Ash wished if he could stay there, with her, forever. He didn’t even know that stars were visible in the dark sky by now.

“I think I should leave now. Nice to meet you again, Ash.” She said softly.

“Now? I mean, yes you should.” It seemed as if he had a difficulty in speaking out those words. “I hope we meet again…”

Aurora smiled and left.

687601.jpg

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Hello wonderful Bloggers!

I hope you’re having an Amazing day, if not, make it Amazing…

Haven’t read the previous parts? Go, check them out too…

Blue Watery Eyes #1

Blue Watery Eyes #2

Today, in my school there was Diwali week Celebration in which few competitions were conducted like Mehndi competition, Pot decoration competition and innovative gift wrapping competition (Though I really don’t know how can someone innovatively wrap an empty box) So, I chose pot decoration. At least I think that I did a wonderful job and I am really happy for that. Unfortunately, pots are submitted in the school. Hope we get them back before Diwali so that I can post its pic here.

So, please let me know if you liked this episode of Blue watery eyes? I would like to know if you’re enjoying it or not? I know for a writer, the size of his audience doesn’t matter, even sometimes we don’t even feel our writings to be read by soemone because they are close to us. But you know, support and encouragement really helps, even if it’s a writer or anyone else.

I would like to share something with you. Maybe that would be nothing much to you, but It is for me. I love talking with my blogger friends, That’s why I say “Don’t forget to comment even if you forget to like” Time for a little surprise for Maureen

On my #1 episode of Blue watery Eyes, She commented:

“Well maybe other stories are more of suspense and mystery and while they make for an excellent read, this story of yours seems to be like a dream..it’s that magical experience that we all wish to feel, you connect more so with it… It’s light and airy. And draws even you, the writer in. We come from the universe and nature, so of course we shall return to the nature to seek peace…at least that is how I feel over it. I just love the innocence and mysterious excitement that you have combined here!”

Thank you so much Maureen for such beautiful words. 🙂 I hope you liked this little surprise. Guys, there are so many amazing bloggers with whom I love to talk, and she is one of them. Make sure you visit her blog and rest, leave it to Maureen. She will mesmerize you by her writings and her creativity. 

I hope you liked this episode. Let me know what did you feel after reading it. I would love to read your comments. So, don’t forget to comment even if you forget to like!

Make an Amazing Day!

See you soon… 🙂

 

 

 

 

 

Advertisements

89 thoughts on “Blue Watery Eyes #3

      1. I feel so lucky to be one of your readers Harsh! haha Im tickled over a good story to read…Im so bad at picking books to keep my interest so I have stopped trying. Seems I was looking for something good to read in all of the wrong places I guess! I have such good luck here!

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Even many people sometimes misunderstand both these terms (alone and lonely) there’s a significant difference between then.
        Both words show the same emotion but different feelings and that makes all the difference…
        I am really glad you like this story…
        😊😊

        Liked by 2 people

      3. Yes this is very true…I use to have people say things like they felt bad for me or they were sorry that I spent so much time alone when its my intent to. I am alone by choice. I think its really just because they couldn’t imagine it for themselves that they had loneliness inside that kept ahold of them. Truly there were points in my life when I was surrounded even crowded by others that is when I felt to be so lonely…now I only feel free! 😀 You are a talented writer my friend no doubt about it! 🙂

        Liked by 2 people

      4. Even when I asked one of friebds that what do you think is my negative side? She said that I am sometimes very introvert which she hates bexause she is social bird… but then i told her maybe its not negative point and then she said you are different, really… and I thanked her for such a beautiful compliment… 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

      5. Ive not seen anything of a negative side to you Harsh! Being different is my very favorite thing to be! I keep away from people even though I am very social when the time is right. It is a way of letting myself only pay attention to me and what I might need for my own well being its a healthy and smart way to be at least in my opinion haha! 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

      6. Well if you have one and Im still not convinced you do haha but if you do it is really only natural like you say we are not meant to be perfect but you handle yourself with so much respect for others and a genuine gift of caring that nothing negative will ever have any real chance inside of you for sure! 🙂

        Liked by 2 people

  1. It was an awesome read!! I loved it, especially, the character of Aurora, (loved the name) she seems like a combination of a mysterious, beautiful and serene kind of person or some supernatural creature. 😀
    And I wish you get your pot back and I get to see it too. 😁😁
    Good luck to you!! 😃

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you Deepika Di for reading this post… I am glad you liked it! I was confused while choosing the name but Aurora’s meaning was so beautiful and suited to the character, that I chose it…
      Even I am thinking to make her a supernatural creature, but will it be good?
      Let’s see…
      Yeah, I am missing my pot too much. i hope he is comfortable there with the other pots… I hope other pots won’t disturb him… haha 😂😂
      Thank you so much!

      Liked by 1 person

      1. It is always a pleasure Harsh 😃😃
        Yeah! The name’s really beautiful! And if you make it a supernatural character then it’s or if not then that’s fine too, because I know it will always be an interesting character.
        Hahaha… I hope the same!! 😀😀😀
        You’re always welcome!! 😃

        Liked by 1 person

      2. That’s sweet of you to say that!!
        As I’ve said, you’re an amazing writer and your are awesome too, it is always fascinating and captivating. I get so engrossed in it whenever I read your story. So, thank you very much for writing such amazing stories. 🙂 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

      3. Please don’t tell me that you are of my age or younger than me… 😂😂😂
        At first, I didn’t know at first but then after talking to you, you talked like a mature person… that’s why…
        Oh god! (Such a tough question – even more than question if trigonometric identities😂😂😂)
        Btw, I can call you just Deepika if you like… Deepika is a beautiful name…
        😊

        Liked by 2 people

      4. Hahaha!!! No I’m not of your age, I’m a college student . But I thought you knew, as I’ve mentioned it in my post ” Finding Myself ” may be you didn’t read it.I have no problem in you calling me Di, I would love to have a sweet and an amazing little brother like you. 😊😊
        Stay blessed!! 😃😃😃

        Liked by 2 people

      5. Thank god I was right. Actaully, teher are really few of my age here, I don’t know why. if there are some, they leave too early and disappear.
        Both of my elder sisters are in college too, Now one more is in college. That’s awesome.
        And i am really glad to have so kind Di like you… 🙂
        may god bless you, always!

        Liked by 1 person

  2. You have woven such a magical story. Beautifully used words and expressed so well. You are a really nice story teller. I am proud of you for being such good at such a young age. Way to go buddy.

    Liked by 2 people

  3. I loved the character of Aurora, a beautiful name too as you said. The best line when you mentioned that there is difference in live lonely and feel lonely. An amazing write-up and curious to know how will they both meet again.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Haha, may she likes to disappear so that Ash can miss her… 😂
      Thank you so much Di…
      I am really glad you liked it but you know what, whatever I write is just fine but that is your visualisation how you imagine my words in your mind…
      You think beautiful and that’s why that old😊 looking bridge over the Sanctus lake is beautiful…
      😊😊😊

      Liked by 1 person

  4. That’s a really beautiful piece. I cant wait to read more. You made me curious to know more about Aurora (lovely name) and I haven’t read the previous posts yet! But I’m hooked!
    Keep writing 💖

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Ok so now I come back here now that my thoughts are gathered…sometimes I cant find the words of gratitude to give to a person so deserving as you Harsh….How beautiful a person you are to take such time and put such thought into adding my comment of which I meant with my whole heart! You make me wish there were more people like you in the world but then I realize that would be impossible as it is you are truly one of a kind! I am so thankful each time I read here and with every kind word you speak to me (well type but you know what I mean haha) I enjoy knowing you! At your age to already be so enlightened and well written, I am impressed by you daily! I hope that you never stop writing my friend! 🙂 🙂 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. First of all, thanks a lot for giving me a huge smile…
      I love to talk to people like you and I am really glad that I found you here, in this blogging community.
      😊😊😊
      You’re so sweet and kind. I am glad that you find my writings impressive.
      I promise, I won’t stop writing.
      😊😊 Thank you again…

      Liked by 1 person

      1. I have no doubt that huge smiles suit you perfectly Harsh! You are most welcome it is my pleasure! 😀 😀 😀 You strike me as a person who would keep all of his promises so this promise makes me so happiee!! 😀 😀 😀

        Liked by 1 person

  6. You have narrated the scene very well..The scene is beautifully set up with pebbles and golden fish in lake.then the old bridge..sun and clouds..then comes this mysterious girl aurora..you can very well write a book in near future..

    Liked by 1 person

    1. That’s a huge compliment for me, except the fact that this is actually the book I am working on… that’s why I share my first draft with my friends to get their feedback whether they like something or not, feel free to give me negative feedback too, I take it as constructive criticism… 😊😊

      Liked by 1 person

  7. The transitions between the tangible and phantasmagoric in these episodes are such a wonderfully unique experience. The illusion, the questions that each episode creates, leaves the reader craving more even before they have finished. If I may, I do have one small critique thus far. The use of “he/she said” is perhaps more frequent than it needs to be. I think that using more variety in the dialogue tags could add more fluidity to the overall piece. I look forward to seeing how the story grows as well as how your writing will develop as you evolve as a writer. Keep up the good work!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Yes, that (he and she) even I feel it disturbing the flow of the story when I read this over again. But I hope you won’t find it, or you will find it lesser, in the next parts.
      Thank you very much for such a wonderful advice. 🙂

      Like

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s