“Wake up!” Aunt Annie was standing over me. I found myself rolling around in my bed curled up in the blanket. I looked at my hand and fortunately it was perfectly fine. I knew it was a dream, but the pain was real.
“Do you want me to tell you that you are running late?” she said.
I looked at the clock and jumped from my bed. I dressed and got ready to go to school when suddenly, I realized that I was missing something. It was very important, but I was drawing a blank as to what it was. I tried to wake up the sleeping horses in the stable of my mind, but they were not in the mood. I left the question unanswered since I was already late. As I was leaving for the school, Aunt Annie called out and stopped me on the doorstep.
“Andrew, don’t you say goodbye to me anymore?” she said.
“Yeah sure, goodbye and take care,” I said with my breakfast still in my mouth. She put her hand on my shoulder.
“Take this with you Andy,’’ she pulled out her other hand and produced a locket that shimmered 50 shades of gold in the morning sunlight.
“What’s this?” I asked but she didn’t reply.
I put the locket in my bag and ran towards the school as fast as I could to avoid the gates closing in my face. Luckily I managed to reach them in time — according to me. I headed toward my class and opened the door. Fortunately no one seemed to notice except Erik, one of my best friends. We’d been best friends for many years and that is the reason I know so much about him. Did I tell you that he carries a whole cafeteria in his bag? Well that’s true. You can especially always find him murdering a burger. He is the type of friend who I can call for dinner, but not so much for group studies. But to be truthful, he is probably better than me at studies.
Erik waved at me and I sat next to him. Right behind us, Christine was sitting by herself. Christine is the third angle of our triangle. Our friendship began with a fight when by mistake, I dropped my water bottle on her bench and it showered her books. BEWARE, this will be the last thing you’ll ever do, she implied with a look. She turned into mini-sized Queen Kong that day for damaging her books. Eventually, we became friends when I helped her with a school craft project. But yes, she did take her revenge, that of which I don’t want to mention. Not only is she passionate about books, but I also like that she will not hesitate to help others. She doesn’t have many friends except for Erik and I because she doesn’t like when anyone calls her a nerd, which happens a lot. Though I don’t consider myself a nerd, I don’t have many friends either. I said hello to her and she replied, “You are late!” Erik was searching out for something in his bag and I knew what it could be.
“Hey dude, want some fries?” He took some fries out of his bag and my guess was right. Even during lectures Erik manages to have a hamburger and coke without even being noticed. I sometimes wonder if he is invisible to the teacher.
He offered me his fries but I shook my head and mouthed, “NO.” He looked pretty happy with thought he would not be sharing his food.
“Teacher,” a loud voice growled from within the room. “Aren’t we supposed to submit our assignments today?”
And there she was — Elis — the girl I hate the most. She is shaped like a fat drum and her ugly hairs look like a nest on her head. Her rotten teeth pull back to reveal a creepy smile. I can never understand what her problem is with me, but she never misses an opportunity to poke fun and insult me with the help of her minions.
“Andy, have you brought your assignment?” Christine whispered.
I searched over my bag and the horses finally woke up; that something which I was missing at home was none other than, the assignment.
“Oh yeah, I brought mine in!” Erik said gloating.
“Andy, you forgot to bring it, didn’t you?” Christine read my face which was turning pale.
I nodded with a pleading expression for them to help me out.
“Ok fine, we’ll help you. Now stop looking at me like that!” she said.
“But how will we help you?” Erik asked.
“You guys always have a plan. Make me invisible or something and hide me!”
And then, Erik came up with an awesome idea. “Let’s ditch the class!”
Christine punched him in the back so hard that his eyes almost came out of their sockets. “Are you out of your mind? Where will we go?”
And then again, Erik came up with a plan. “Let’s go to the library.”
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Hello wonderful Bloggers!
You can find the first part here – Andrew’s Adventure #1
I hope you liked the second part in the series… I’d love to get your constructive and supportive feedback so that to enhance my writing skills.
Waiting for your comments in the comments section, Don’t forget to comment even if you forget to like!
Have an Amazing Day!
see you soon…
Good second part, the story just moved forward smoothly in this part, less adventure but the narration was good and smooth. Well keep on trying friend you are doing well.
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Thank you so much!
Well, here I just wanted to move them to library… What happens next is truly unexpected…
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Thanks for the support…
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That is very well written, keep going!
Have a great day.
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Thank you so much!!
Btw, would you like to read my post (blue Watery Eyes?)
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Sure! Why not.
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A delightful read!
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Thank you so much!!
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Keep writing.Cheers!:)
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Cheers!
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Really good follow up, a good improvement to the first as well
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Thank you so much!!
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I am really glad you took time to read the second part…
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You are a good story teller. The story just flowed smoothly. I have read the previous part too. 😉
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Thank you so much!!😊😊
I am glad that you read it too… Thanks for the support…
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Well, those who write so good. Support is inevitable. Jio.. :p
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Oh god, not again!! 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
I just forgot about it and then you did it again and I am laughing like crazy…
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Still could not get my hands on that stupid sim!!! 😡😡😡😡
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haha.. Fortunately, I got it with the help of my friend. There wasn’t much rush.
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Happy for you!! 😊😊
Wish ab aapke comments me jio ka zikr nhi hoga… Coz finally you got it now…
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Hahaha…nahi bilkul nahi…That Jio article would come up though. :p
And yes do provide feedback on my posts too if you are free. 😉
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I was waiting for that Jio article since when you mentioned it! Remember the title : Jio: the real struggle! 😂😂
Bhaiya, I adore your writing but you always write posts about love and heartbreaking sadness… I love the way you write them but I just can’t find any words to give my feedback on a topic which I have no knowledge in… Experience is out of the field… Haha 😂😂
But still, I love reading what you write…
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Yeah..I do remember the title. 😉
Haha.. Well, then you can tell me a topic to write on. I would be happy to write on that. It would be a sort of challenge. What say?
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Awesome! Though I had this idea on my mind since a long time… But I’d love to share it with you!
My challange to you is: write a post or a story contrasting aloneness and loneliness… A story which differentiate between both these terms! What say? Do you accept it…
I would like to know what you come up with because I’ll be writing on the same maybe sometime after…
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Really thank you for giving this topic. I would sure write on it soon.
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I won’t force you… If you really like it, then only write it… 😊😊
I’d be waiting for what you come up with this challenge.
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Arey, I like to challenge myself with different things otherwise I get bored.
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Great! Even I would like you to write something which I have knowledge about… I mean anything other than love… 😂😂😂
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Hahaha.. Even if I have no knowledge about something, I would still try to write on it. As once I would write it, it would make me more versatile. 😉
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Good point…
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good challenge..
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Wanna do it? Go ahead… Even I’ll be writing about if sometime after (its a secret how I will add it my post) hah
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ha.. by the time, you might have known that my writings are something which crosses my path.. and so never i tried any fictions…anyways waiting for your posts..
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Will try to post it very soon…
Thank you so much!!
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Oh No! Not the LIBRARY!!!!! 😱😱
Love the characters 😍😍😍
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Thank you so much!!!! 😊😊😊😊
I am really glad you are enjoying reading it…
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Excellent! Always write Harsh you have got quite a talent for it! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thank you so much!!!! 😊😊😊
It is so sweet of you to say this…
I’ll be posting next part really soon… 😊😊
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Seems like the horses didn’t just wake up…they were galloping too! ☺ I like the way the story is moving…don’t break it in too many parts though.
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Sure, I will try to post a big one next, but I think readers don’t like long posts… Or it is just me….. Haha
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If you ask me…even a good story if broken down into many parts or stretched too long loses its essence and grip. That’s all. ☺
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😊😊 True, will keep this advice with me…
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☺☺
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